What am i doing wrong!?

hiTempest·Feb 14, 2016·1 votes·703 views

i have no idea what im doing right and wrong can someone please check out my op,gg and tell me some positives and negatives. thanks guys http://na.op.gg/summoner/userName=hi+im+freeze

7 Comments

GEMS GEMS GEMSFeb 14, 20161 votes

AP Alistar top?

hiTempestFeb 14, 20161 votes

yeah i had got support and the guy didn't realize he got top, so i had to go top :p

Unfortunate GameFeb 14, 20161 votes

1st thing i noticed. "Bought 1-2 wards" some games have even zero wards bought. Vision is power, you need vision.

Ok, now to your kdr. Think of it like this. Each death is a mistake I've made. Obviously sometimes their is no counterplay and sometimes its just unlucky. But for the most part if you died theres a mistake made, so rewatch your game, or realize what you did wrong when you died. Maybe you had no vision or map awareness and got ganked cause you were overextended?

The main things I see are csing warding and possibly playing on autopilot? Csing - its optimal but not every game will pan out like this, you want to aim for 7-10 cs per minute, anything under 6 probably means youre messing around too much (unless your a jger)

Hope this helps!

hiTempestFeb 14, 20161 votes

thanks man, ill work on it :)

Unfortunate GameFeb 14, 20161 votes

Yep. The biggest advice i was told that impacted my gameplay was look at the minimap and have awareness of where everyone is. Also in a team fight think before go in. Is it a 4 v 5? (are we grouped), wheres my positioning (am i front lining as the adc?), and look at their items vs your items to see how much gold you're up or down and if you can even win the team fight. Get better understanding of match ups. Do we outscale, or get outscaled? A lot of stuff, but you get it. GL with future games and climbing.

swiftsnipeFeb 14, 20161 votes

Hey,

I'm Swiftsnipe. I do a lot of coaching for players. This is what i notice and what my suggestions would be:

your most played champion is vayne - by a lot.

-Your win ratio with her is less than 50%. Focus on improving with her.

-vayne is weak early and naturally scales later. your runes and masteries should be geared towards her early game where she is weak.

-You should be using your warlords mastery page with her. thunderlords in my opinion is a trap. Vayne builds mostly attack speed and so the extra damage from thunderlords isn't that significant.

-your rune page is too greedy. mana regen blues are not needed and should be flat MR. your reds should be all attack damage and your quints should be attack speed. Going so heavily in attack speed makes your early game very weak. The extra AD reds help a lot.

-Most notably the enemy ADC often outfarms you. Even in the games you win. Focus on continuing to CS throughout the game.

GL on the rift!

hiTempestFeb 17, 20161 votes

i do use warlords and fervor i just have that page named as ADC because i usually use it for other adc's such as Lucian , Corki , and Ezreal . i have 2 separate rune pages one with the mana regen blues and another one with a lot of attack speed. the mana regen page is for champions again such as corki lucian and ezreal, people that have to use a lot of mana, the other rune page is for my vayne, caitlyn, and jinx. i do realize i have to work on my cs'ing so overall thanks for your help i raelly appreciate it as i'm still really young and don't have much of a computer ~thanks!