What do you guys think?

Reski··3 votes·273 views

Hey guys, here's abit of some Rammus jungle gameplay. I was wondering if i can get some Constructive Criticism for any improvement that might be needed. Making video's like these are really starting to grow on me. Is there anything i should change? Thanks for your time :)

3 Comments

FantasySniper3 votes

You use the zoom way too often. It's supposed to focus vision to provide a surprise when something comes up on screen or make you look closely at the subject. The fade to the next clip sometimes feels too noticeable. I would make it a straight transition. (Unobtrusive) music in the background really helps smooth the viewing experience for a montage. Cutting the music can make the viewer pay attention at a specific moment before you put it back. Pausing for the memes gave the wrong effect. Slow down the video if it provides the proper emphasis (like at 0:48 or 2:09), but at least make them smaller and placed in some other part of the screen where it won't cover up the action.

I really like the video. You've got a great sense of humor. I'll be subscribing!

Reski2 votes

Your post/time was much Appreciated! Thank you so much :). I'll be sure to take every aspect of your post into effect!

Adjoint2 votes

I CAME, I SAW, I SUBBED.

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