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PhantomGG1 votes

So gonna say the goods and bads

Goods Gameplay you seem pretty good and it's entertaining to watch. Editing is clean You and your friends are entertaining

Bads Your Microphone is literally nails on chalk board, if you get spare cash invest in a better one Make it clear who is who, one thing sky williams does is he will literally edit in his own subtitles for each person in the game and it helps a lot Lacked a story line, every game with friends video a story is being told like "my friends are feeding and i had to carry" or "we had this really hillarious convesation about something that happened at school

Just some tips

Akali is SO HOT1 votes

Try to get a new mic. The video probably could've had a better "plot" to it. It sorta just felt like a bunch of random clips you put together to make a generic video. Make the video about a certain thing and center it around that instead of just a montage of clips.

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