New Darkin Champ Idea

GummyTurtlePvP·11/13/2013, 11:31:48 PM·3 votes·1,096 views

I've had this idea for a new champ. Her name should be Halosis which means Conquest in latin. Just like how Aatrox means war, or atrocity in latin. She is a darkin support-like champion that uses a crystal that she holds in her left hand (I want to see a left handed champion :P). I would like her to be more of a fairy. I don't want it like tinkerbell or anything, I think she should look really cool, and her color scheme is blue and white or silver. She should be humanoid, but look nothing like a human. Blue skin maybe and a white ponytail(ponytails are hot :3) with a tattered cloak but with armored breastplates and greaves(pants). She has a brown tattered satchel at her side filled with more crystals Tell me what you guys think and add on to anything I said or just tell me your ideas :) my username in league is GummyTurtlePvP so feel free to add me.

Build: Lifesteal quints, magic pen marks, armor seals, and magic resist glyphs.

Build her hybrid with lifesteal :)

I give credit for her kit to DrBananaKing and PhoenixOfOrder for giving me some ideas :D

Passive: Crystal of Healing: When Halosis is about to die, she throws a purple crystal on the ground, healing her depending on how much power she has. Power is gained by using abilities. If no abilities are casted for 5 seconds, she loses 10 power every 2 seconds. her power bar is purple too

Q: Crystal of Teleporting: Almost like aatox's dive Halosis throws an orange crystal and gets teleported to it. Does no damage to anything. Medium to small radius, just enough to be able to teleport over walls and stuff :)make it so the animation is that she throws the crystal, teleports under it, and catches the crystal. Cooldown is 15 sec and costs 10% health.

W: Crystal of Giving: Halosis takes out a white crystal and a white beam shoots out to an ally champion. she takes some of her health and puts it into the champion she supports. she gets a lifesteal boost for 3 sec after she uses this. costs 7% health and has a 20 sec cooldown.

E: Crystal of Protection: Halosis takes out a blue crystal and it glows. it's power is used to create a shield used on allies that buffs armor. 15% of any AD that hits the shield is converted into health for Halosis, and another 15% is converted into health for the champion that the shield is on. you can use it on yourself to gain 30% of the AD as health just for you. This shield doesnt block any magic damage. costs 10% of health and has a 15 sec cooldown

R: Crystal of Power: Halosis throws a green crystal on the ground and stuns any enemy champions for 3/3.5/4 seconds. does a lot of magic damage too. has a cooldown of 2 minutes and costs 15% health. I know her ult seems a bit broken but I tried to make her skills less broken.

Tell me any feedback about tweeks to the kit or anything else :D

(WARNING:The lore is very long and painful to read so you don't have to xD)

Lore: Halosis is one of the 5 Darkin. She happens to be Aatrox's sister. They have always fought since they were little. They don't talk to each other much ever since they started to fight in battles together, but they don't bicker at each other anymore. When they were little, they chose weapons from the Elder. She saw that Aatrox chose a sword the could follow commands and almost seemed that it as living, while Halosis chose a locked leather satchel. This satchel had a mysterious glow that you could see through the seems. Aatrox went off to train with his new sword and Halosis went in search for the key to this satchel. She came apon a great city guarded by a gargoyle. The gargoyle spoke in a deep soothing voice, he said what is your buisness here? Halosis only showed her satchel and the gargoyle said, you've found my master, Durand's satchel! Where did you get it? Halosis spoke with a soothing voice like the gargoyle's; My Elder had 5 artifacts and this was the one I chose to help me on my journey. The gargoyle said come with me, and he opened the gate and followed him. The city was huge! Nothing like she'd seen before. They came upon a small house and the gargoyle entered. An old man at a desk studying something very odd looked up and smiled at the gargoyle. They whispered to each other and they old man gestured for her to follow him. The gargoyle waved goodbye and told her his name. She smiled and went up into the attic of the house. It was filled with experiments and oddities. Over in a corner was a luminecent key being held by a silver gauntlet with a blue trim. Durand spoke with a raspy voice "That my dear is what you are looking for." She grabbed the key and put on the gauntlet. She opened the satchel and inside was a pile of different colored glowing crystals. She took one out and it felt warm. The old man said "That is an artifact satchel that I found in a temple. I spent many years searching for the key, and I finally found it. I lost the satchel in a village filled with strange people that kind of looked like you." "My village was wiped out from a flood after I left it. There were 5 survivers, only 3 I know in person. That satchel was given to me by my village Elder." said Halosis. Durand smiled and said "Yes, that's why I'd like to give it to you. I enchanted the crystals myself. Now, you must get on your way for I have many things to do." Halosis exited the city and the gargoyle said "You are always welcome in Demacia. After awhile Halosis felt as if she had no purpose in life. She fought alongside with her older brother, but she couldn't stand the violence he caused. So she joined the League of Legends!

Tell me what you guys thought of the lore!

A skin idea i have is Underworld Halosis. It would look like Gatekeeper Galio or Underworld TF but with its own style. Her crystal would have that special rune that tf's card has and galio's arm band thing

Be sure to like this page and tell me any ideas! GL HF Guys!

(P.S. I would love it if you guys post skin ideas for her too :D)

8 Comments

DrBananaKing11/14/2013, 1:43:58 AM2 votes

I feel like the idea of another Darkin would be interesting. It would especially be interesting to make it Aatrox Aatrox's sister maybe. The blue and silver idea would be great since it would also follow the same characteristics of justicar Aartrox. Making her name be conquest seems like she would be a more offensive kind of support I am thinking (just an opinion). Maybe her passive could give allied champions a 5% critical strike when they are around her (the passive would not include her). Q could be a target spell if casted on an ally they gain 10% life steal for five seconds and 20 extra attack speed if casted on an enemy it slows them and causes them to take 20% extra damage. W could be a shield of some sort. E could be a passive/active ability, the passive would increase all forms of regen for Halosis and allies by ten percent and the active would heal a target ally (passive would go away when active is on cool down). Finally her ultimate I want to be something similar to Lulu LuLu's. I would possibly go for it puts an ally in a frenzy allowing them to take less damage and do more damage plus giving them more life steal. Just my idea hope you like :)

PhoenixOfOrder11/14/2013, 10:04:16 PM2 votes

Passive: I think the passive is a little too overpowered and like BananaKing said, you should probably just make it a one time effect that doesn't include her. W I think since she is a support like character, you should either make this ability cost more mana or, make it so it has like a 17-23 second cool-down so that it wouldn't be spam-able and overpowered. E This is ability is a good idea however, this to is way too overpowered. Imagine it like this, it's a 1v2 late game and you and your ally are facing a fed aatrox, he has 300 ad. As soon as you activate your e, he activates his w and gains massive attack speed (on top of him building attack speed already) now, all that health you should have just loss, was just shielded and split in between your ally and you. I think you should make it so it gives a small percent (like maybe 3% or 5%) to you and your ally. Everything else is good, sorry about the constructive criticism. But I like your character and would love to see her approved. :) {{summoner:20}}

Catue11/14/2013, 3:17:27 AM1 votes

shouldnt there be a physical charecteristic that links her with aatrox like his tattered wings idk...... good idea though there should be at least one for every role.

Pharis65412/3/2013, 8:57:14 PM1 votes

awesome