Mako, the Jaws of the Sea

Dkayed·12/5/2013, 6:09:16 PM·5 votes·1,447 views

I saw some shark nami skin pictures and gave me an idea, a shark champion who's lore could tie into namis. Also Mako is a AD Bruiser champion. So here it is. Mako, the Jaws of the Sea Abilities: Passive-Rough Scales: deals 2% of damage taken from auto attacks back to the source Q-Tidal Hunter: Mako charges to an enemy slowing them and all enemies in a small radius damaging all enemies hit. If used on a marked target, the primary target is stunned for one second instead of slowed W-Rip: Mako uses his rows of teeth to ravage his target with his next auto attack, this bite also causes a slight bleed and heals Mako for a percentage of the initial damage E-Jaws of Strife: passive: every fourth auto attack mark the target. Active: auto attacks become cleaving strikes damaging all enemies in front of Mako and slightly increases his auto attack damage R-Open Water: Mako submerges himself Ian's gains massive movement speed, he is untargetable while submerged and can jump from the ground three times to damage enemies in a small area before Open Water is canceled Feel free to let me know what you think!

13 Comments

Epimelius12/5/2013, 9:38:28 PM3 votes

I do have to agree with the fact that the ult is "OP", but it can be changed. For instance, Mako submerges himself under ground, gaining a movement speed buff (like sivir's ult, but the buff only applies to him), and can attack one champion (whom you selected before using the ult). I imagine his ult would be similar nautilus' ult, in the terms of a lock on ult. You select someone, dive "underwater" which makes you become untargetable, once mako reaches his target, he jumps out, deals physical damage and knocks them. Similar to the shark from Fizz's ult.

Epimelius12/5/2013, 6:22:46 PM2 votes

this seriously seems like a good idea! continue on developing this champ, and it might be able to hit the big times. Check out my idea, its the "Malzahar Skin concept".

( http://community.na.leagueoflegends.com/c/ideas/n7Fjpw9h-malzahar-skin-concept# )

P.S. Don't give up advancing Mako, i had many ideas for champions, but i didn't feel it was worth my time to make a champion that wont make it. I was wrong, Riot checks forums daily and if you develop Mako further more, he can make it.

Goldenelk59812/5/2013, 9:25:47 PM1 votes

Would he be rivals with fizz? Cause that would be kinda cool as well.

TheGreeNinja1312/5/2013, 9:46:25 PM1 votes

My thoughts are, that this is a great champ idea, but I feel that the ult should be one jump up, damaging an enemy and on the way down hit another/the same enemy, rather than: jumping 3 times.(it would be weird and excessive in my opinion) Other than that it sounds awesome to me. Also, he could be friends with Fizz, or just BE Fizz's ult. It would be fun to make if I were with Riot.

JackAqua12/5/2013, 9:50:43 PM1 votes

Just a tip for evaluating feedback : The problems people have are normally just misunderstandings, but if they do find an actual problem, they will give a solution which you should better ignore a bit :)

iAppIeJuice12/5/2013, 10:29:46 PM1 votes

I love it, even more than i like my own idea (link below, i need feedback on it)

http://community.na.leagueoflegends.com/c/fancreations/e7irT8sH-new-tank-dpsbruiser-champion-idea

It needs some work but i think he could be cool, they need a cool, fresh idea for a bruiser in my opinion

Ðıor12/6/2013, 1:58:17 AM1 votes

this is great finally I can become nami's natural predator

The7Experiment12/6/2013, 9:21:13 PM1 votes

First couple of abilities sounds like fizz. I agree ult is op.

Dkayed12/6/2013, 11:59:49 PM1 votes

i would like to thank everyone for the feed back and i think instead his ult would be better used like Vi's where he locks on (as Doc Wumbo had mentioned) and that he would then knock the locked on enemy up. also i think for the movement speed duration would be the same time period as that of nocturne's ult timer. (i don't remember the exact length) also i think for Tidal Hunter he would have a range slightly lower than wukongs e.

Honeysack12/5/2013, 8:45:57 PM1 votes

the only question I have about this is, how long does the ult last? and I think being untargetable and gaining massive movement speed AND you can attack 3 people is OP. I would suggest that instead of being untargetable, you would recive 25/50/75% less damage while active.