Cody Sun, A Successful Rookie Season

Not bad, but could use some cleaning up with grammar.

Not bad, some improper jargon (hot streak not heat streak) and grammar. But nothing major.

The problem. It is too short and not informative. I watched worlds, skipped most IMT games. I learned they went bad in Spring (I already knew this, and I learned the scoreline but forgot it again) and tied with TSM in summer (again already knew this). You didn't actually tell us anything except scorelines.