Weekly NA LCS Recap (Week 1) Feedback Appreciated!

Hello League fans, as a former sports writer and an avid fan of Esports (League of Legends in particular), I have decided to begin writing a weekly recap of the NA LCS simply for my enjoyment. I am choosing to focus on the region because it is the one I am able to pay the most attention to. Any feedback is appreciated, and if people enjoy these weekly recaps I will continue to post them, becoming more extensive as the season progresses. Thanks to anyone who checks it out!