Diamond+ Coach needed - What do i need to work on to carry Silver?

StealthWarden·9/22/2015, 6:50:47 PM·1 votes·279 views

I received coaching from Whiteshaddow1 to set me off in the right direction to get out of Bronze. I have found myself once again in that nasty part of everyones climb where i am watching all the stupid happen but am not doing well enough or the right things to compensate / carry enough games to continue my climb. Tips are always welcome, however what i am looking for specifically is for someone to take a moment to spectate a recorded op.gg match (when i start recording them) and make notes on the things i didnt do, did wrong, need to work on, etc. Preferably with timestamps so i can go back and watch the video to really learn what youre trying to teach me. I have two accounts

StealthWarden

ToiletteOfDoom - This is my original account and most played on [ also lowest mmr :(

Thank you for taking the time to read my post, and i look forward to working with you.

Honorable mention to FHMarshy who has been an encouraging figure in my ladder climb and a good friend.

10 Comments

CTT8vfOAvl9/28/2015, 5:12:11 PM2 votes

Howdy, diamond 5 player, playing since season 1, I'm glad to offer you any help I can

FHMarshy9/22/2015, 8:11:17 PM1 votes

I wasn't mentioned :(

Liquid Dario9/23/2015, 12:10:55 AM1 votes

I mean if you have a diamond coaching you.. I could offer some more consistent help if marshy is not going to be someone who's available a lot. Especially if you are a Jungler which from the looks of it you are exactly that. I just carried myself out of silver last night so I know what it takes to make it to gold. If marshy is going to be a consistent help to you though then there's really no need for another coach. But if you do want some help I am a pretty consistent jungle player. My ratio with most any jungle tends to be in the 60% up to as high as 90% win ratio in ranked play as you can see by checking my account. So if Marshy isn't around, I can be your second guide if you wish just add me.

Liquid Dario9/23/2015, 9:30:47 PM1 votes

ok try it out and i will be on the lookout for replays on op.gg I will be as in depth as possible. Add me in game as well so that I can message you directly instead of just here on the forum.

Liquid Dario9/29/2015, 7:59:31 PM1 votes

0:47 Morgana Wards Tribush near red with you in it You do not roam up and place your ward at your red bush to beware of any incoming from river. You could have been 4 man ganked at any point putting you behind and risking many issues. Also you didnt drop a ward at all you should ward every time as your ward will quickly refresh and its the reason why you start with the ward trinket to begin with.

2:10 You do not give yourself 3 stacks of ferocity when killing the golemns getting 3 ferocity is important because then when you start red you can give yourself 5 stacks allowing you to eighter lower damage from the red buff or kill the red buff faster with the double Q and speed proc from empowered Q.

2:50 you proc empowered Q when you should have proced empowered W as you would have had alot more health due to the empowered W this is useful because you could have then stacked 3-4 ferocity dealing with the raptors after which would have allowed u to do more against the leesin that you encounter just seconds later you could have perhaps flashed and got a free kill had you had 5 stacks of ferocity with you empowered bolo strike as you hit lvl3 directly after the raptors.

4:05 you could have gotten an extra stack of ferocity or two by waiting 2 seconds while you killed blue buff you could have waited to gain ferocity off the little golemns it is important for your sustain and ability to continue to farm the jungle or give you enough hp to gank.

5:00 you go to gank gp but you dont ask wukong if gp went into the river bush to ward. It is very easy for wu to say yes or no to gp warding the bush which would help improve your ganking odds And would have helped u know if he had it warded when he walked away which made you believe he had it warded which made you walk out and show urself. Also if your going to gank like that and dont have vision of the enemy jungle ward their top lane tri bush immediately before you gank, Again had you known gp didnt have a ward it would have allowed you to know you had time to ward the tri bush without him really knowing anything. As lee sin litterally walked through the tri bush just before you warded it making it impossible for you to know he was there this is the cause of that gank failing. Had you warded you would have known the lee was there and backed off. You also would have been aware he had red buff which means he out damages you. Also wasting flash and bolo on GP is completely useless as he can just use his fruit to negate it ganking him early is usually a bad idea. Especially when your laner doesnt have CC till lvl 6 at 6 it would have been more likely to succed as even if he healed your CC wukong could ult him basically guaranteeing the kill.

7:00-7:20 you take rangers trailblazer when #1 your already behind from dying #2 you are a skirmishing champion you want to pick ppl off and if your weak or behind you cannot accomplish your goal. Skirmishers sabre would have been much better in your position had you taken it and smited lee in this fight you would have won that battle. Skirmishers or the freeze item is always better with rengar. Also if they are going to stay and fight use empowered W to heal there was no reason to bolo as lee was staying to fight also you were in the bush which means had he tried to escape you had your jump to chase him down he couldnt escape in that situaion. Had you empowered W you woulda again won that fight.

also sweeping lense 1st back.

10:30 again not enough stacks of ferocity gained on the jungle minnions had you gotten 5 stacks when you went towards annie you could have ulted and gotten the kill because of lux hitting her root which would have guaranteed your combo.

11:21 again not enough ferocity yes you get the kill but had you waited 2 seconds more on wolves and gotten 5 stacks you would have increased your odds further of getting the kill. Also you could have ulted which would have increased the odds of u securing the kill. And also making it less obvious that a gank was coming your goal as rengar is to secure kills not assists. your trying to carry the game with this champion. Also it would have saved your flash as you would not have needed to use it to save yourself as he wouldnt have had any ability to react due to your empowered bolo. unless he reacted almost instantly with his fruit + ult

12:28 you have 5 stacks of ferocity and plan on entering a fight instead of keeping it you decide to use it on a small golemn instead of autoing it which again would have made your ult alot more successful 12:56 you dont try to move left or right to throw off morganas Q which results in your death as you dont try to outmanuver it.

Dont 1 v 1 a fed gp without ult.

15: mins in still dont have sweeper lense you go after dragon but theres a ward right on you.

16:20 you dont know or do the combo correctly to land the kill you miss your bolo because you didnt use the correct combo.

use bolo on scuttle crabs cc lowers their armor.

19:30 you use ur stack of ferocity that doesnt accomplish anything you then go for gromp to refresh your ferocity in that time you were out of position and they could have collapsed upon your team and you would have not been able to do anything. 20:30 you could have ulted at any time to go in on the gp who was all alone while corki was taking tower shots u got the kill but could have gotten it sooner so that corki didnt die.

22:06 you try to save the corki when you should know its futile you should have kept walk ing towars the tower in mid lane instead you die for no reason protecting a dead man.

20 + still no finished jungle item ? should have been right after you got the 1st hydra item.

30 mins fight. when gp was all by himself you all should have left him alone and shoved the lane and tried to take the middle tower / inhibitor its worth more to do this than to waste your time chasing him.

Phantom dancer? no reason to ever build that you should be building yummas ghostblade. I.E should also be after ghostblade.