Question about the star guardians

I have decided to do a story based on the Star Guardian. Whether it will be good or not , I leave you to judge. I come here today to ask a few things.

1. What would you love to see?
2. What age is year 2,3,4? I have been unable to pin down the age group but for the year 3 I think that should be . Based on the pics I hope to write that ages as year 2=15,3=16 and 4=17.
3. The first chapter unfortunately will be dedicated more character introduction and development but don’t worry I plan to open with a fight between lux and a swarm of Kog Maws.
4. Should I post it here or just link to it?
5. Any information sources other than the wiki?
6. Anything else you have to suggest to me. Any plot holes I should not fall into? If you are wondering what the final thing may look like. Here is some of the stuff I have already written. http://whisperingwindleia.deviantart.com/