What do you think about this?

It was a peaceful day in Demacia and Garen was having a walk when suddenly he heard something. Those noises were similar to him and he knew who it was... It was Kha'zix. But he heard Vel'koz, too. They somehow made a portal to Demacia. Malzahar made the portal, so they had an army of voidlings on their side, too. He immediately called Quinn to help him. Quinn told her Valor to warn Jarvan IV. They realized noises were coming from the house, so they entered it. But there was no one there. Creatures from The Void escaped... They didn't know where the creatures went. They could have stayed in Demacia or return back into The Void. While they were thinking where they went Jarvan IV already came with his army. He asked where are The Void creatures. Garen and Quinn said that they escaped. Jarvan IV was disappointed in them because they now don't know where they went. In Jarvan's mind there was another thought. He thought that Garen finally became crazy. Garen was never a smart guy and all that he had was his love to Demacia. Right as that thought was going trough his mind he heard a scream. A young lady was screaming, she was next to house they were in. They ran to her house as fast as they could. When they entered the house they saw a strange being. It looked like an octopus. Young lady was crying but the strange being said:“Tears appear to serve no function.“ They all recognized him. It was Vel'koz. He opened the portal before they could react and took the young lady with him. Last thing that he said was:“Let's see what they're made of.“ He escaped...

What do you guys think of this? If you like this i'll make part 2.[slayer-jinx-wink]