Ariel did an amazing job fleshing Riven's character out in this. i could feel her remorse and her pain, how broken she is! the way she looked at the old couple with hope. deep down she wish for them to be her family. it even mentioned it in the story,a silver of hope that somehow they accept her.
When no one came to say peace with her...well,that was heartbreaking! she even think of herself as selfish just because she wants someone to sit with her until her time is up! i can relate to that.
Riven was always one of my favourites! Thank you Ariel!