Some A-atrox story love

So I was bored and was thinking or rewriting the bio for aatrox into something more intense and worthwhile. I already did the beginning as a test and want to see what you guys think. Should I continue?

There have been many whispers throughout the centuries of a demonic creature turning the tide of battle. The legends refer to him as a Monstrous Sword wielded. He wields a mystical sword that seems to feast on the very blood of the enemies he slays. Very few men are able to survive the onslaught he brings, and the few that do are told to tell the tale of A-atrox.

(A-Aron=Aatrox)(meme)