One thing bothered me in that Leona lore.

As I stumbled upon, "She felt an awesome presence filling her limbs..." and to my dismay "She reached deep inside herself, drawing on the awesome power from beyond the mountain." Me here with my bland mind I guess. It's not a super lame word but reading it makes it kind of hilarious and not taken seriously. I like using the word "Awesome" but to read it in something like that, I kind of cringed. Didn't feel very professional. It pretty much turned me off when I read it. Although I kept reading it with my cringe being a curious person. Looks like I am also a boring person. What were your opinions? (Almost wrote "onions")

And I know my grammar sucks but I'm not volunteering or getting payed to write stories so...