I just started making videos and I'd like some constructive feedback.

xBimbo Bagginsx·3/12/2016, 3:44:08 AM·3 votes·301 views

I've just started making videos and I'd like some constructive feedback. Please do not be deliberately hurtful. Each video I make I try to do something different so I get better at using Adobe Premiere. I've just started to use LoL Summoner Info so I can center my recordings a little better. I really appreciate any feedback you boys can provide. Thanks Again.

9 Comments

DrCyanide3/12/2016, 3:57:04 AM2 votes

It sounded like you were trying to kill my earbuds! Seriously, what was up with that volume?
The music's repetitive nature made every play seem dull.
The camera angles detracted from the plays. I'd recommend using a replay service of some kind (replay.gg is my go-to) so you can get better angles of what's going on.
You tried to type "GET OVER HERE!", but the video cut before you finished typing... almost like you were ashamed of the play or saying it.
The ending felt stolen... the audio and the editing didn't match anything else in your video...

ƒæµ3/12/2016, 4:02:55 AM2 votes

It's ok. The music was kind of boring, the plays mediocre. I am guessing this is like a silver or gold game? My feedback is just... I hope you are making these just because you find it fun, and not to get popular. Gaming channels like this are pretty bland and there are millions of them. If you really wanted to get noticed you would need to do something far more original and make it way more entertaining to watch. Not exciting to watch sometime we see in common games on a daily basis (average thresh hooks)

ƒæµ3/12/2016, 4:16:21 AM2 votes

Try to be a one trick on something off meta or something like that. You could even do like a funny moments or nice plays you made with some cool editing and I think it would get moer attention :)

Papa Slothy3/13/2016, 12:47:10 AM2 votes

to gain popularity u could try to make a full AD or AP thresh "montage", also that music gives me a headache