I want to be the best

Hey look i know im silver but i wanna work on being the best i want to practice i play daily i need help i want people to tell me what im doing wrong i want to climb into challenger someday to prove everyone telling me i cant i can i know its huge dreams but i know deep down i can do it with enough effort and dedication ive been playing for a year about so far so anything is helpful! please help meh haha my twitch is swaflordy! https://www.twitch.tv/swaflordy