Hi, could you check out my new YT-video please?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XMIE4LRsYuo So, I just made this little video, I know its far from perfect, (you will know when u see it) I wrote the reason why that problem occured to me, and as to why I couldn't really fix it, so anyways, hope u enjoy, and also all kinds of responses and tips are welcome, just make sure to not be offensive ok?