3 Comments

Aír12/17/2015, 2:15:44 PM1 votes

I do not know if it was on purpose but I think there are some typos. I hate to be the person to point it out, but I just want to save you some trouble. >.< This is just a suggestion too. Sorry if this seems rude, I just want to help. >.<

In snow day, a day what everyone feel happy

A snow day, a day where everyone can feel happy,

Everyone can be fun with each other

where everyone can have fun with each other

But...

A monster like me...

`

Everyone looks me as monster..

Everyone sees me as a monster...

No any place for me..

No place for me...

P.S. On a side note, the art in this comic is gorgeous! I am looking forward to the continuation! :D

Excitidly Insane12/17/2015, 4:53:08 PM1 votes

Wow Wukong what a dick [zombie-brand-mindblown]

RaptorKarr12/17/2015, 8:31:42 PM1 votes

Gives Ahri a hug