New to Youtube.. All criticism is welcome so i can improve.

Honestly I wasn't sure if I should post this, but I wanted to get a feel for what is happening. If anyone would like to give me honest thoughts on my videos, I would greatly appreciate it. I'm still learning this whole editing thing but I think I'm doing well considering I started about a month ago.

I decided to make these guides because the guides from other youtubers I've seen aren't straight up ability breakdowns. They post a full length gameplay and just talk about the abilities.. Anyhow, please let me know how I'm doing and if I should continue this or not.

are the other guides I've done so far. Veigar is the newest.