Vel'Koz Montage (Need Criticism)

Hey Guys, Guardians here, and this is one of my first ever videos. Looking for some support and/or feedback on what I can do to improve on my editing skills/film making. I realize that the clips are a bit laggy - but please bare with me :)!

Thank you and don't forget to have an awesome day :D Recommend full screen - 1080p