FEEDBACK NEEDED Full Ap Elise Jungle

Hey guys This is my first video I made last night at like 1:00 AM, it's just normal gameplay footage no fancy inserted animations or anything but I was wanting you guys to check the video out and tell me how the overall quality of the video is like graphics, commentary, gameplay, etc. Not asking for likes or subs just want to know if there is anything I can improve on for future videos.

Also I know my mic makes me sound weird.. can't really fix that atm.