What do you think guys / Feedback appreciated

Hey Fellas :)

first of all im from germany so please be aware of that when u continue to read this post ;) this is my 3rd language and to be honest, i`m not that good in english.

So what do i ask for ?

Well I just started streaming on Youtube and Twitch simultaniously and I just wanted to ask u guys n girls a few questions.

Just for clarification : I do not want u to watch my Streams or leave a like or something like that ! I just started and I am aware that my channel will probably be small forever and im ok with that :P

What i ask u to do for me is :

Can u , whenever u got some spare free time, check out my Channel and look if my Stream is ok ? I rly dont know exactly how to write my need down tbh xD

It would be cool if u can check out a video a few minutes and afterwards just give me some hints in : How to be better while streaming. yeah that sentence sounds better xD

Maybe my streaming Style is completly unwatchable or something like that.

Please give me some advice on how to become better or what to change.

Would really appretiate it.

And sorry for the bad english :P

Oh, and my twitch name is TheZippelWhoop