Nami login theme with Vocals :) Wondering what you guys think!

Hi guys! :) So I made some lyrics to go with Nami's login theme and sang them as well, I'm wondering what you guys think. I got the inspiration from River Spirit Nami's skin recall.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q5AfGqA2Wlw

I made lyrics for a few different choruses but it ended up sounding a bit much, so here are the lyrics of which some I didn't include. :3

Down here we wait Surrounded in faith A stone that shines bright The darkness it hides

Without it our hope The faith we all hold Will wither and fade A promise was made

From depths of the sea We had to retrieve That mythical stone A century old

The fate of our tribe Mythical Marai Rests on her shoulders One called the Tidecaller

At bay we must keep Monsters from the deep

We'll turn into the bait If we leave this to fate

To the shore I'll go I'll save my race by finding the Moonstone

I am the tide and there's no way I'll be turned