[Champion Concept] Toth, Calamity Unbound

The Neverworld··4 votes·383 views

Prologue/Lore:

"Isnt the sky beautiful, Jake?", "Yes, but not beautiful as you are Sendra!" both kissed each others face in a romantic mood. "You know what my father always told me as a bedtime story?" asked Sendra, "No, what? Tell me!" answered Jake, as both were holding their hands while leaning against a lantern on the streets of Demacia in the night.

"Once upon a time, there was a stranger on a journey. His origin was unknown, but he was beautiful. Many couldnt take their eyes off of him, and he liked the attraction. But one day, one was jealous and gathered hatred in himself. Hate against the unknown man, because people was attracted to him. All womans turned on him, even the one he loved. So one day he decided to kill the unknown man."

Jake interfered "Wait, what kind of bedtime story is this?", Sendra rushed to answer and wanted to continue the story "Be quiet and listen!

The jealous man waited for the dark of the night and surprised the unknown man. The jealous man stabbed many times into the unknown man with a knife, and in the end he mutilated his face. As he stood up to run away, the unknown man breathed out, showing that he's still alive. The jealous man slowly turned back, his eyes opening wide open. The unknown man asked him, is it because of the face or because of his past? The jealous man looked at him as if he were a monster.

***No clue of what the unknown man has spoken, the jealous man took his knife out and went back to give the finishing blow to the unknown man. ***

***But close before he could attack him, the unknown man said that, wether it is from the past or because of his appearence, he apologized. ***

Finally, the jealous man kneed down and cried. The crying turned out into a crazy laugh and with the end of the laugh, he killed the unknown man and was never seen again."

"Uhm, I hope you don't tell this to our future childrens, because this sounds more like a horror story" said Jake, and Sendra answered "Oh you silly, this is a story about accepting yourself as you are and not to fall for jealousy. And you know what? There is a rumor that in the night, when you are alone in the dark, the unknown man appears and kills you!". Jake responded "That's not funny Sendra", "I still can't understand your way of humor, but I have to leave now. My parents will shout at me again for being so late.".

Both Sendra and Jake said good night to each other and were going their way home alone. Jake, however, was going the street down. He was afraid because of the story, as the darkness veiled the city and only the lanterns on the street were his only hope of approval.

Suddenly, one of the lights of the lantern behind Jake began to malfunction and didnt work anymore. He thought that it would be normal, and so he continued to walk down the street.

For every passed lantern he went by, the light went off from each lantern behind him. As he was close to the last lantern, he heard a voice saying "Do you fear the night?" and he turned. Unfortunately he stumbled down and was landing in the light of the last lantern.

Red eyes appeared in the dark, a voice continued to say "Or do you fear the light?". Jake shouted in hectic "What do you want from me? Let me alone!". "You want to be alone? All alone in the dark? You sure?" the voice began to sound louder.

The red eyes were bigger, the person was coming closer, but still veiled in the darkness. The person slowly said "I am everything you need", then he deeply continued as his face entered the light "And everything you fear".

The last light went off and a heavy scream appeared, since then, Jake was never seen again."

Informations:

Origin: Unknown.

Age: 35

Appearence: Green Hair, a Mask hides his face, insane eyes. Long and thin plate shoulders with gigantic eyes on it. Gloves with four claws. Both little fingers are gone. He has no feets, but walks on peaks. (I've made a picture about him. Toth)

Attitude: Two personalities: Chaotic neutral, Chaotic offensive, Insane/Crazy - and Calm minded, beastly.

Friends: Shaco, JinX, Nocturne, Nautilus (Even though Nautilus has no clue about Toth's feelings for him, Toth feels a urgent bound between him and Nautilus. Both shares the end of the path, where their lives have end and the memories faded away. Both motto is "Forward")

Rivals: Piltover, Demacia. No specific Champion has yet to come to be a rival of Toth.

Voice: Hungarian Accent.

Login Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aaN3IMWxfKc

Battle Music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ziQ8grsMskQ

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Roles: AD/AP Hybrid Jungler/Assassin

Recommended items:

Berserker's greaves(Or Boots of Swiftness), Spirit of the Elder Lizard, Blade of the Ruined King, Guinsoo's Rageblade, Hextech Gunblade, Liandry's Torment(Or Spirit Visage)

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Attributes:

Attack Power 6/10 Defense Power 2/10 Ability Power 6/10 Difficulty 7/10

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**Stats: ** Damage 50 (+3.1 per level) Attackspeed 0.650 (3%) Health 435 (+81 per level) Movement Speed 350 Armor 17 (+2.8 per level) Magic Resist 30 (+0.0 per level) Health Regen 7 (+0.6 per level) Attack Range 125

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Concept Explanation:

Do you see the red circles around campfires, fire torches, towers, nexus and blue/purple crystals? They enlighten the places on the maps. However, some passages between the light sources and places without light like Baron's pit or river, may let Toth walk there without revealing himself. If he enters the light, he is revealed instantly. If he attacks while veiled in the dark, he reveals himself.

Towers and Nexus have the greatest range. Campfires have an average range. Fire Torches reveals in a medium range and Purple/Blue Crystals reveals a small range.

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Abilities:

"Darkened Manifestation":

Toth's abilities are free to cast and are restricted by cooldowns. Darkened Manifestation may enhance the abilities. Toth receives one stack of "Darkened Manifestation" for every .1 seconds, up to 100, without being seen by the enemy. This includes being unseen through the fog of war. Darkened Manifestation is used to enhance abilities and will be consumed for every skill use.

Passive "Dark, Darker, Death.":

Toth is always invisible when he's in the dark. Whenever he uses a ability or attacks enemy units, he makes himself visible. He becomes invisible again after 5 seconds out of combat. In Addition, Toth gains bonus movement speed when avoiding the light. Bonus Movement Speed 20/40/60 (+5 for each 20 Darkened Manifestation is stored)

Q (Single Target Damage - Debuff) "Vulnerability":

Toth summons several knives that will stab on all sides into the targeted enemy for 3 (+ .5 seconds for each 20 Darkened Manifestation) seconds.

Initial magic damage 40/60/90/110/140 (+ 20% AP)(+ 40% bonus AD).

Within the duration, the enemy target has grievous wounds (Reduces healing effects) and the damage taken from Toth's abilities and basic attacks are increased by 10%/15%/20%/25%/30%.

If the target dies while this ability is still active, the cooldown is reset.

  • CD: 15/13/11/9.5/8

W (Passive & Active - AoE Slow Aura & Bonus damage on-hit) "Pain":

Active: Toth rams his both claws in the ground while moving, unable to attack enemy units for 2.5 seconds or until recast. The high pitch of the claws on the ground creates a wave of slowing effect, slowing all enemies near him about 50% (+10% for each 50 Darkened Manifestation).

Passive: Every third basic attack deals bonus physical damage equal to Toth's ability power multiplied with the stored Darkened Manifestation. 20%/40%/60%/80%/100% AP x 0.1% for each 20 Darkened Manifestation is stored.

(Ex.: 100 AP x 0.1% = 10 ... With 100 Darkened Manifestation: 100 AP x (0.1% x 5) = 100 AP x 0.5% = 50. This makes a total of bonus damage 100 AP + 50 = 150 + attack damage.)

  • CD: 15/13/11/8.5/7.7

**E (Jump - Cone AoE Damage) "Audience": **

Toth swings his claws forward, jumping up to 400 units forward. At the end of the jump, he lands on the ground and sends a shockwave at the end of the line in the same direction.

Initial physical damage 50/80/110/140/170 (+50% AP)(+ 50% AD)(+ 5% of missing health of enemies for each 25 Darkened Manifestation).

  • CD: 17/16.5/15.9/15/14.5

**R (AoE Damage Over Time) "Fun Time": **

Toth turns into a hurricane of claws for 5 seconds. He spins extremely fast, unable to see his body, only a tornado of blades is seen.

Toth deals to enemy units near by each second 25/50/70 physical damage (+80% Bonus AD)(+100% AP).

This ability heals Toth about 20% (for each 50 Darkened Manifestation) of the damage done.

In this state, Toth can't be stunned nor silenced, but can be snared.

  • CD: 110/90/70

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Quotes:

Selecting on Champion Selection: "Excellent choice, now let me spank you! Har Har Har"

Ingame - Walking:

Uh, I hate this walking.

It gives me the chills

I like more pouring rain!

Hey Summoner, next time summon me with a horse!

Forward!

Ingame - Attacking:

Don't you dare sticking together like that!

Ho Ho Ho, is this a trap in your pocket or are you just happy to see me?

Never had enough of slicing through your cadaver

Uhm, is it me or is it cold?

Ingame - Joke:

"Its a nice place for vacation" they said.. "It will be fun" they said...

Damn it, my feets hurtin'.. oh wait, I don't have any! HAHA!

They said insanity is just a step forward to death.. I say, let death come to my dinner party!

If not me, who else would love to have a closer look into your cadaver?

Ingame - Taunt:

Always funny to see a jackass hiding.

Oh come on, get out of the bush.

Is today the "Garen-Day"?

Today's opposite day! Now go and kill yourself.

Ingame - Laugh

Scary laugh

Ingame - Dance

A rope caughts Toth's mask and it takes it above him and stays at a position above him. Toth hides his face with his left hand, while he jumps up and tries to catch with his right hand. Then he says "Meh, that's not funny, Summoner" and pretends to dance, but tries to get the mask back. At the end, he gets the mask and wears back again and then he whispers "Scumbag".

Ingame - Death

Upon Death, Toth stages a dramatical death scene on purpose.

Ingame - Easter Bug

If Toth meets Shaco, he says "Oh, hey bro" / "Is your summoner a jerk too?" / "My summoner stinks like fish.. shh"

If Toth meets Nocturne, he says "Once a prisoner, now a prisonguard, heh?" / "Don't get me wrong, but sometimes I do not recognize you smiling or be angry.. oh no, don't punch me!"

If Toth meets JinX, he says "I love a lady who enjoys a big rocket launcher! Thihi" / "Your chaotic level is OVER 9000!! Muahahaha"

If Toth meets Nautilus, he stays serious and says "Y'know, we both share the same kind of path in this world" / "Do you sometimes think that your past was better than your current life?"

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Animations: While walking, he jumps slightly over the ground (Like Nautilus).

While attacking, he uses his claw gloves.

First attack, he attacks with his right claw hands.

Second attack, he attacks with his left claw hands.

Third attack, he launches a heavy attack with his right claw hands.

Upon critical strike, he both uses his claw hands to strike down the target.

Attachements: Summoner's Rift Light Sources, Twisted Treeline Light Sources, Toth's face and Toth's body.

13 Comments

NineInchNarwhals2 votes

are you 12?

The Neverworld1 votes

I could ask you the same question. Obviously, no, I'm not.

So I counterquestion you, are you 12?

What did you thought when you came in my Champion Concept thread? Hey, why don't you ask him about his age? Really? Is this everything that interests you?

Is this Fan Fiction subforum or is it a dating website? Please, refrain from offtopic, please... it's just hurtin when someone just wants to bash. If you're not interested in my Concept, then don't bother please.

Gondlink2 votes

the pass is kinda OP and so is his q aand his w pass

DMC750012 votes

Ok, ignore NineInchNarwhals. He's being a d*ck. Personally, in my professional opinion, This character has a great deal of flaws. Let me give examples.

  1. His Ulitimate, Fun Time, seems both a little weak and not related to a killer. The way I see it, Toth might kinda be a Joker type of guy, so this ult is a little weird. Also, it doesn't say if Toth is immune to CC effects. Thus, Lux's Bind or Lulu's polymorph can also be cast on him? It'll make his ult useless.

  2. Some of the damages for your other abilities seem wonky. Maybe lower some values or rework the passives, perhaps?

  3. Another psychopath? Seriously, isn't Jinx and Shaco enough? If you'd maybe follow something along those lines, this character would be a keeper in my book.

Overall, I'd give it a 5/10 for concept design, and a 3/10 for ability design.

Thanks for posting this! Don't stop creating! Also, make sure you look at other champion designs, such as mine and a friend named Yousogreat! Keep on playing, summoner! :D

The Neverworld1 votes

(1). I've forgotten to write it, so I edit it. Stuns nor silence can't interrupt his ultimate. However, Polymorphs or Suppression (Urgot's & Malzahar's Ultimate) won't interrupt, but he's not completely immune. So he stays on the side or under effects, like Lulu's polymorph makes the target a bit slower. But snares working, I mean he's snared, but not interrupted.

(2). What do you mean exactly with wonky? Q is a bit rough, but low. W deals pretty much damage with its passive, but only if you go full AP. And if you do so, you'll be raped. I mean, Toth has only one mid-range ability (Q) and one gap closer, the rest is close combat. You can keep Toth out of sight and out of close-combat easily, so his damage compensates his vulnerability, especially when he's entering the light, when his movement speed bonus is gone and his DM can't be refilled.

(3). Honestly, there can't be enough psychopaths. However, Toth may act like a, but he's entirely different than Jinx or Shaco. Jinx is a chaotic girl, she's alone and has noone, but to be seen by everyone, she tries to get attention by destroying everything. No matter if she wanted it long ago or discovered after she destroyed things, she felt a urge of power in herself that makes her happy whenever something blows up, that's Jinx. Shaco is a so called "Demon Jester" who laughs in the face of death. His appearance and his origin are unknown, he is skilled, no doubt, but the most thing that brought attention to everyone, is his personality, which allows him to laugh even when someone's dead. He's that crazy.

But Toth.. Toth was a normal Runeterran, he left his tribe to discover new things in Valoran. He entered a city which had noble atmosphere, he didn't knew anything about the city, not even the name of it, but he walked in it for many hours. Women discovered him, told him that he's beautiful, and so they spent their time with him. One guy, who felt in love with one of the woman long ago, tried to get her attention, but was never successfull. In this condition, he went crazy and assassinated the traveller in the night. Not only he killed him, but before, he destroyed his face and everything. He was killed by something so simple and so uneccessary - Jealousy.

In this matter, noone knows, but only that after his Death, he still walks through the cities of Valoran and lurks in the shadow of the night, to avenge the descendants of his Killer and those, who found their love and abuses it. He's not a normal psychopath, he's more of a sample of those who kill for envy, those who kill only for their very own behalf and those, who not respect the lifes of other.

BindingKhaos2 votes

i think this concept is a great idea for a new champion

The Neverworld1 votes

Thanks!

The7thKing2 votes

its a great idea though i think he shouldn't be able to be stopped by snares and his ult could use a little more power

The Neverworld1 votes

Why? I think even because of the overwhelming power of his Ultimate, snares should work. Did you add the values to the damage? I mean 70 damage every second plus 80% of Bonus AD and 100% AP.

If you play Toth, you'll probably go for first AD, then some subdamage from AP. That makes maybe 100-200 bonus AD plus 100-200 AP and the rest depends on situation, if you go more tanky, want more utility or go again full damage, but lets assume the 100-200 ap and ad.

That makes almost 75 + (80% of ~200 =) 160 + (100% of ~200 =) 200 = 435 every sec for 5 second.

The7thKing1 votes

BUT if hes caught by a snare you've wasted a powerful ability

The Neverworld1 votes

Then play wise :P

Did you know, that Zac's Ultimate was supposed to make him immune to CC?

I participated in the PBE and played Zac, so I know that. But now he has no CC immunity.

My personal opinion is that skill-need gets over easy-2-play. Toth can close gaps with E and W, even when his W only slows the surrounding enemies.

The7thKing1 votes

Zac is the least of our worries, at least hes somewhat viable. Khazix after nerfs his win rate hit the junkyard, they amputated the best thing that crawled from the champ creator

The7thKing1 votes

forgive me if that seemed rude but im kinda upset about it, Khazix feels like he now has to be a vulture for kills and it really annoys me. ugh if only i had time magic like Zilean then i could prevent my favorite champ from being gutted

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