Kindred Short Story (Sheperd, Caretaker)

Hello, I recently wrote a pretty short story, which I'm calling Sheperd, Caretaker. The story involves Kindred (Who doesn't really have much lore at the moment, so when that's released this could all be inaccurate), but I wrote it how I personally think the champion would behave in the world, i.e. Shepard to the dead, two parts of the same whole.

I posted this elsewhere and it got some praise, so I hope you guys enjoy it as well, might make a second draft if you guys find any inconsistencies.