Vladimir Rap
Hello, I'm Player. I wrote a small rap (10-20 seconds) and I was going to either rap it myself or have a friend do it in collaboration with a few other raps I'm writing for other champions. I would like feedback for any changes I could make to make it sound more fluent or anything that might make it better. Feel free to add me in game and let me know or just post here.
Vladimir walks up, shoes covered in mud, and there will be bad blood, because he's feeling slim, so let me get a rim, shot, as you get caught, tides of blood hit hard, and the blood leaves you scarred, follow up fast with a quick transfuse, whole body startin' to feel loose, draining your life until you plead for truce, the battle is becoming less and less fun, and it's getting harder and harder to run, look at the ground, can't believe what you found, you're slowly being drowned, the crimson pool surrounds, the reaper gets crowned, as he takes another victim down.
Also if anyone is interested in being a rapper for this or any of the other pieces I'm making, let me know. I am also planning to build a very simple flash animation around this (the drawings probably wont be great though).
P.S. let me know if I posted this to the right board I rarely use these forums and hope I got it right.