well, the drawing is good just... it is me or sometimes does not have apparent reason? I mean, in the first one looks like some baloons are missing and in the second it just... well, it is weird? Not weird the response, more like weird the script itself. It' s work in progress maybe?
in the first page i def agree its a bit off. it was my own personal style choice to keep the placement of one bubble where it was. I think once we get a bit farther the placement will make a bit more sense but in the end yes oh yes is this just a work in prog lol. Im better at righting more serious tales so making myself right to fit within the comic rather than writing as much as i please is a challenge ive yet to Master.
However I hope to get better and above all its is just for fun and to explore my head cannon of the League.
nd now I present page three!