Could I please get some feedback on a video I made?

SSW·5/10/2015, 1:13:19 AM·1 votes·1,160 views

I made a video a while back, and I've gotten a few comments saying that people enjoyed my sense of humor. I'd like to receive a little more feedback from you guys because I really do enjoy (attempting) to make humorous videos . If you've got any tips, send 'em my way! Thanks.

My newer videos should have more clarity in terms of my voice, this was filmed using my laptop's mic, but I'm back home and now have access to an actual mic. Orianna

4 Comments

Ethereal3115/11/2015, 12:26:22 AM1 votes

Main thing for the microphone is to edit the audio in Audacity (it's free), and use a noise removal to remove the background noise. StephanosRex made a few videos on impressions and he used noise removal to block out his fan and stuff.

Thicc Chime5/13/2015, 7:13:16 AM1 votes

The core joke/concept is pretty hilarious. The next step would be to do more with it. There are plenty of songs about butts/ass that you could incorporate that would add to the humor on their own. You could also throw in some gameplay and "prove" that orianna is out booty hunting. These are just some general ideas but you get what i'm saying hopefully.