Art Animation & story - Ravenous League - A dark Comic series

88wUg2fI59·2/7/2015, 5:45:59 PM·13 votes·1,850 views

View image: ch2 p1 ravenous league animated by hivih d8h

**Tumblr link ** **Deviantat link ** Hey ! I am making a dark and serious plot based LoL comic with machinations, twists and surprises !

I update twice a week, always on Sunday and one in between :))

Criticism, comments, anything really helps me out a PHREAK-TON, Sorry if I have grammar errors as I am not a native English speaker, but please point them out to me so they can be fixed ! :O

Comic blog - first chapter

Deviant art - first chapter

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6 Comments

DarkLiquidDeath2/8/2015, 7:32:25 AM2 votes

This is really entertaining! I especially liked the second chapter, it was nice seeing that side of Lucian's character as well as Bilgewater. The art style is quite nice too.

Doctor Dyment2/8/2015, 8:18:44 AM2 votes

Very well done good sir, and might I say that I loved the Nautilus cameo. The art style is very nice, and I like the in-depth look at some of these characters. I have two big issues though, one of which is that sometimes, the proper grammar that should be there is not. This includes capitalization after the end of sentences. My other major issue, is that you made this fantastic comic that I am now in love with, and you are still making it as you go along, rather then it be finished. (This isn't an actual complain, I'm saying I don't like waiting for something that is really good.) Keep up the good work gent. Or... lady...

333lom2/8/2015, 1:10:02 PM1 votes

The backgrounds and colour are amazing! And nice idea adding slight animations to certain frames. Keep up the good work!