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Art Animation & story - Ravenous League - A dark Comic series

88wUg2fI59··13 votes·1,850 views
View image: ch2 p1 ravenous league animated by hivih d8h

**Tumblr link ** **Deviantat link ** Hey ! I am making a dark and serious plot based LoL comic with machinations, twists and surprises !

I update twice a week, always on Sunday and one in between :))

Criticism, comments, anything really helps me out a PHREAK-TON, Sorry if I have grammar errors as I am not a native English speaker, but please point them out to me so they can be fixed ! :O

Comic blog - first chapter

Deviant art - first chapter

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6 Comments

DarkLiquidDeath2 votes

This is really entertaining! I especially liked the second chapter, it was nice seeing that side of Lucian's character as well as Bilgewater. The art style is quite nice too.

88wUg2fI591 votes

Thanks a lot man ! Glad you like the story, honestly I value story above anything else so it means much more to me that you find art secondary to it ^^

Yeah chapter 1 was but a short prologue and a practice at action, its purpose will only become clear at the very end of this arc, which will be about 200 pages if I get to finish it XP

But chapter 2 is where I plan to pour all my time and passion into, I intend to make the next action scene as a story board with more animations, sounds and maybe music, and have the plot reveal some of its twists by that point :))

Doctor Dyment2 votes

Very well done good sir, and might I say that I loved the Nautilus cameo. The art style is very nice, and I like the in-depth look at some of these characters. I have two big issues though, one of which is that sometimes, the proper grammar that should be there is not. This includes capitalization after the end of sentences. My other major issue, is that you made this fantastic comic that I am now in love with, and you are still making it as you go along, rather then it be finished. (This isn't an actual complain, I'm saying I don't like waiting for something that is really good.) Keep up the good work gent. Or... lady...

88wUg2fI591 votes

Thanks a lot :) -Grammar issues.. that is something I had dire problems with since the very beginning, though this account is on NA I am not at all an native English speaker, and this expressed itself as terrible typos when I first started which people quickened to point out, and it helped me become more aware of it and improve.. thankfully for the most part is only capitalization and not more serious issue like writing malevolent and menevolent etc.. :P

-Im glad you like it! but even though I plan to push the visual quality with things like animations, sounds music and more, at the top of my priorities is to create an engaging mature and authentic story

In short.. I hope to draw people with the art but have them stay for the story :3

Thanks again dude! Its very encouraging to hear

333lom1 votes

The backgrounds and colour are amazing! And nice idea adding slight animations to certain frames. Keep up the good work!

88wUg2fI591 votes

Thanks ! :) Something I really wanna try for the next fight is to have it as a single panel you have to click to move to the next panel and each one will have some animations and sounds, but for that Il need some programming assistance ^^

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