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[Champion Concept] Claire, The Forgotten One

Ðıor·12/21/2013, 1:44:11 AM·2 votes·862 views

Passive: Disappear- Claire's basic attacks add a stack of disappear (3 stacks max)making her next spell do an additional 10x number of stacks(adds 10 more damage every level) Level 18 +180

Q: DIE- On Claire's next basic attack she will swing her scythe will full force dealing an additional 90/100/125/150/175 (scales off Ap)

W: Remember - Claire throw's out a chain dealing damage and stunning the first enemy hit (scales off Ap)

E: Vanish- passively grants Claire attack speed Active: Destroy - Calls down shards of knives/swords etc. In an AOE

R: Nothing left- Claire dashes through at target enemy champion 4 times in each direction (north, south etc.) and becomes untargetable during the cast (scales off Ap)

Special items: Scythe of the past- Grants a 8% damage shield on every third Q (DIE!)

Scythe of resolution- Killing an enemy(minions and neutral monsters included) grants Claire 1 additional AP to a cap of 50,upon reaching 50 stacks her Q (DIE) will refresh its cooldown if used to kill and enemy champion

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Quotes: (selected quote) Time to bring Chaos

THEY WILL NOT SURVIVE

Noxus will crumble

Do not forget me summoner

There death is inevitable

A lone wolf isn't always weak

Many years may have passed but I never once forgot

You do not deserve to live

I've Been waiting for this moment to come

Joke: your life will be over in maybe 1 or 2 seconds laughs

Joke 2: YOU DEFEAT ME laughs Don't kill me bro that's really funny

Taunt: The names Claire, just a heads up so you know the one who ended your life

Taunt 2: You gotta work on your skills newbie

Dance: (not dance ideas please feel free to give me one XD)

Special interactions will all Noxians

Level 1 status Hp:483

Mana: 366

Mana regen: 5 per 10 sec

Move speed: 385

Armor: 30

Magic resist: 25

Appearance: Full black leather with brown cloak (that covers her shirt) black scythe(with a purple aura radiating the blade)

Lore: Non yet but her opening quote is 'Somethings should not be kept secret' Claire Lowette

9 Comments

zigerastica12/22/2013, 10:05:11 AM1 votes

The R is just like zed's ultimate.... and her passive is... kind of OP. i mean, suppose her basic damage does 130, like other AP champs, her AD will deal 210 actually in level 18. If u build her AD, her damage will be like.... 680 if her items are full AD

DontArgueWithMe12/23/2013, 3:50:36 AM1 votes

I like it, it's a interesting concept and I honestly would like to play someone like this. The passive seems a little confusing to read though so it may be a good idea to re explain it, maybe a bit more detail. otherwise seems just fine to me. The R is similar to zed's. maybe add some special after effect or give it a passive effect. just a idea, anyways good concept.

Sir ArmaMalum12/24/2013, 5:28:01 AM1 votes

I like the idea, and I don't like treading on character or lore because that's all about personal opinion. I want to see if I can help out with the kit and gameplay here.

Her passive doesn't read well. From what I can tell she can get up to 3 stacks, with each stack doing (10 x Level) damage on next ability. If I got that mixed up I apologize, if not, try to phrase it like I just did to make it easier to understand.

Her W is great. Simple, yet needed in the fact that she needs at least some kind of range or gap closer to function properly. I completely understand if you don't want to mess around with numbers so I'll just throw one out, let's say a 1.25 sec stun? Something interesting you can do is make the stun last longer/shorter depending on if you hit that victim at a longer/shorter range respectively. Just an idea.

Her Q and E combined is a little off. Two pure damage abilities with no other mechanics doesn't flow well with most champions and leaves the champ a bit lacking. I also notice that without her special item, this champ doe not have any real survivability in her kit. If I may suggest to kill two birds with one scythe swing? If you make her Q have an AOE or cleave mechanic and let her E have a defensive mechanic of some kind (shield or dash?) I think that would really help out, but this is again, just an idea.

R makes sense, get some numbers out, and maybe a duration of when she's untargetable?

Overall I think this is a great theme and rough draft kit for a AP melee. Stuff to think about: What abilities do magical damage versus physical damage? Where would you like seeing her ranges be? Do you want her to be more of an assassin (akali, leblanc) or a fighter (Diana, Vi)? Would you like to see her related/rivaling a current champ or be a new face? What does she bring to the table that other champs don't already (Zed being the closest right now)?

Keep at it, and take the whole thing at your own pace. Hope I helped!