Hi, i need anyone at all to tell me how i am doing on my league series i am making. They are supposed to be decently funny and i will take all forms of criticism thanks in advance! ~Tomatrix
I hate to be the one to tell you but Veiger was gutted and his stun literally has a 0% chance of stunning people and his skill shot deals no damage because you physically cannot land it. (Sarcastic undertone)
Hehe, but honestly, pretty good. Keep at it.
I like this, but it could have easily been half or even a quarter of the length and still had all the enjoyable parts. Here's what I would have done differently (this is all just my opinion, I'm just bolding this now so I don't feel obligated to say it 100 times in the rest of the post)
I'd get rid of the parts that are just the champions running around to music or dancing.
I would also up your standards on what's worth putting in the video. Seeing you clean-up somebody who was low after a fight, kill a support or 2v1 their mid laner isn't anything new, and isn't worth including. I'd much rather see all the best plays back to back in 3 minutes than have them dispersed throughout a 12 minute video.
You don't need so many clips of you dying followed by the music stopping. It's funny once or twice, but that's about it.
You should trim your clips tighter. Only include as much as is necessary. Once you go through and start trimming a few seconds of waiting in a bush here, and removing some grey screen there, you'd be amazed by how fast minutes start falling off your video. Just keep making passes through your video; each time you trim one clip, you realize how much slower-paced it makes the rest of the clips feel, and your video will keep getting tighter, until you're down to just the necessary footage.
