I have a League of Legends Series i am making and i need opinions on it!

I hate to be the one to tell you but Veiger was gutted and his stun literally has a 0% chance of stunning people and his skill shot deals no damage because you physically cannot land it. (Sarcastic undertone)

Hehe, but honestly, pretty good. Keep at it.

I like this, but it could have easily been half or even a quarter of the length and still had all the enjoyable parts. Here's what I would have done differently (this is all just my opinion, I'm just bolding this now so I don't feel obligated to say it 100 times in the rest of the post)

• I'd get rid of the parts that are just the champions running around to music or dancing.

• I would also up your standards on what's worth putting in the video. Seeing you clean-up somebody who was low after a fight, kill a support or 2v1 their mid laner isn't anything new, and isn't worth including. I'd much rather see all the best plays back to back in 3 minutes than have them dispersed throughout a 12 minute video.

• You don't need so many clips of you dying followed by the music stopping. It's funny once or twice, but that's about it.

• You should trim your clips tighter. Only include as much as is necessary. Once you go through and start trimming a few seconds of waiting in a bush here, and removing some grey screen there, you'd be amazed by how fast minutes start falling off your video. Just keep making passes through your video; each time you trim one clip, you realize how much slower-paced it makes the rest of the clips feel, and your video will keep getting tighter, until you're down to just the necessary footage.