She's kinda... hideous. Sorry. Nose and face is very ogre-like. I don't know what to say besides practice drawing portraits of real people for a while before drawing cartoons like this.
This is a good time to tell you that Annie Bot sounds like a psychotic pedo sometimes on his steam. Voice like NightBlue, but a bit crazy.
The style itself looks pretty good. Not every girl in the world is a bombshell, so I don't really mind the fact that I wouldn't bang her lol. The actual technique seems fine though.
One thing that pops out to me is the length of her arm. It seems unproportionate and oddly long. If art is something you want to pursue, always study anatomy! c: