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She's kinda... hideous. Sorry. Nose and face is very ogre-like. I don't know what to say besides practice drawing portraits of real people for a while before drawing cartoons like this.
ok thx for your comment.
I tried fixing her face... does it look less ogre-ish now? sorry i never did this type of art before that was my first time.
i thought the same when i first saw XD i really just think it's a matter of angles but that's why i went to school for architectural design and not arts such as painting lol. Geometry op. i like the picture though :) keep at it and get better.
This is a good time to tell you that Annie Bot sounds like a psychotic pedo sometimes on his steam. Voice like NightBlue, but a bit crazy.
err... LOL
The style itself looks pretty good. Not every girl in the world is a bombshell, so I don't really mind the fact that I wouldn't bang her lol. The actual technique seems fine though.
Thanks or your comment. I'll practice more to get art that people would like > w <
One thing that pops out to me is the length of her arm. It seems unproportionate and oddly long. If art is something you want to pursue, always study anatomy! c:
i don't want to pursue art. I just tried to do something new... and was proud, but based on the feedback, it's kind of disappointing. I don't usually do such detailed drawings... only simple anime. And when i sit, my elbows always reach just above my hips. Maybe it's the angle i drew it. thanks for your comment! > w < and i tried to fix her face... it did look abit ogre-ish before. I didn't have internet so i had no references for the drawing. and I hope i improve so people will like my drawings :'(
what i think made the arm looked long was because the arm is made of curvature because of the muscles underneath and the lower portion is just a straight line? there should be an implication that there's a hand attached.
shhh! people can be harsh, especially the league community. but at least they gave you things to keep in mind for your next drawings. as a hobbyists or not, criticism and studying how to improve art is always good. c: i always feel shitty when people don't like my art as well so you just gotta keep moving.
what do you like about it/ dislike, and what can i do to improve?