The first work of my good friend

I like it.

I guess it's decent as a first video, but it's very close to a lot of what the larger channels do (UberDanger, Keyori, RossBoomsocks) so trying to find a different style can work pretty well (I'm not into that sort of humor personally). It's not like you can't branch off from this, but the music selection needs to be expanded (you use two tracks in the same way that Uber does). Just some considerations for your friend.