The first work of my good friend

Zorua of Chaos·Dec 30, 2014·2 votes·876 views

hope you guys enjoy this a bit

4 Comments

Ironclad DragonDec 30, 20141 votes

I like it.

Miss Mommy MokeJan 1, 20151 votes

Thank you so much Dragonzzilla that means a lot to me! Your the best mate.

Ethereal311Dec 31, 20141 votes

I guess it's decent as a first video, but it's very close to a lot of what the larger channels do (UberDanger, Keyori, RossBoomsocks) so trying to find a different style can work pretty well (I'm not into that sort of humor personally). It's not like you can't branch off from this, but the music selection needs to be expanded (you use two tracks in the same way that Uber does). Just some considerations for your friend.

Miss Mommy MokeJan 1, 20151 votes

Thank you for your intellectual feedback and as a matter of fact, I was heavily inspired by those channels! But I am trying to develop my own style. I am extremely thankful for your criticism and don't hesitate to give me more ideas. After all criticism is how things get better and it gives me motivation to make more!