[Champion Concept] Elena, Princess of a Lost Kingdom

The Neverworld·1/25/2014, 11:06:13 PM·3 votes·859 views

#Lore

"Far away, in a kingdom named "Forehyke" that hasn't even yet reached Runeterras wisest man's ears, there was a Princess called Elena, who lived and were raised in the kingdom. As Elena was given birth, fate was predicted to be a hard and harsh life. Her Mother died by giving her birth, only her father, the King, was there to raise her as his daughter.

Several years later, the King was married to another, and so Elena had finally a Mother. Unfortunately, her new Mother abused Elena behind the back of the King. From there on, she was helpless and could never reach her father without being captured by the guardians. Despite her noble status of being a princess, she was treated as a mere mortal man. But instead of keeping her caged in her own rooms, her Mother forced her to learn how to fight and sent her - under false statement - in the name of the King, to the military army, where she was treated of inferior quality, than any other.

Until Elena hasn't reached eighteen years, her father did never spoke to her any word since. Out of the blue and without warning, a invasion of cruel and horrible creatues arrived in the kingdom, she immediately ran to the throne room, where her father was.

As she arrived, while slamming the gates of the room with her bare fists, she saw with her own eyes how her father was teared apart by a couple of demonic creatures, which had flesh parts and pouring blood of the personal guards everywhere on them, even the gem stones were destroyed in pieces.

Elena felt deep sorrow, followed by neverending hate. She killed the murders of her father and mourned appropriate for the ongoing situation, while her kingdom fell for the invasion. She then saw out of a window, how people of the land were killed one by one, without any guilty nor mercy. Guardians, who were granted with the power of the Earth, did not even made a scratch against the army of darkness, which claimed the innocent lives as a tribute for their desires.

She had to flee, to come back at a later time, to end the curse that has been inflicted upon her land once and for all. Elena travelled to a ally kingdom that had always been different from the normal man, but shared the same dream of peace. Three different races were living there, one was called "Obulos" and the other "Krezzna", but the third one was mysterious and since a long time close to be extincted, only a couple of them were living at that time.

Close before she arrived the borders of the ally kingdom, she met two disguised persons, that seemed to be suspicious, their faces were hidden by the leafs of the forest. Elena thought they were behind her first and foremost, but then had a talk together, where both told her that the ally kingdom "Curinix" fell hours ago and they were the only remaining and strongest warriors to survive the journey, to bring a message to Forehyke's King.

However, as Elena told them that she was the princess and Forehyke fell with his King, the two envoy already knew that the whole country was damned for the invasion, and so the two warriors could only do one thing, to escort the princess.

On a very long journey, without no home to return, no destination to stay. Elena, Varkoz and Hobgir became close friends, who sometimes yelled at each other, but in the second time they apologized and accepted each other. Then the day arrived, as Elena was summoned to Runeterra, with her two best friends who claimed her soul to protect her with their very life.

First safe, but then afraid of what might have become to her homeland, she wanted to become stronger, stronger with her best friends, to accomplish the revenge they are seeking for murdering their people.

Elena didn't forgot why she was in Valoran, she was investigating sources of any hint of the leading army of demons who were sent to their countries, to destroy and kill everyone in it.

The League offered any help to improve the information quality and to reach more information broker than she could do all by herself, and so Elena participated on the conflicts of other, to solve the conflict in her Kingdom and her Heart."

"Like a righteous King, Elena raises her sword to declare war upon those who do not esteem Peace" JarvanIV Prince Jarvan IV


#Appearance:

Elena is an average sized girl, about 1.84m big. She's wearing a beautiful white dress that is being ragged. Her hair is long and has the color of gold. On her armor and on her knees, there are diamonds and crystals, which resembles the power of her Kingdom. Her weapon is a short sword.

Elena has two Servants, Varkoz and Hobgir, which will appear on her side whenever she executes a basic attack or uses an ability to call them.

Varkoz is a Obulos, which means that he's a small creature with the exact size as an average sized Yordle. Varkoz however, has a more unique appearance, meaning that he has no real skin, only a skull as his face. He wears a black shirt, brown gloves, has piercings on his face and wears black pants. Varkoz's weapon is a great scythe.

Hobgir is a Krezzna, who is big as a Yeti and strong as a monster. He is pale white and has different rings on his big hands, to deal more damage with each strike of his fists. He also has a Irokese haircut. He wears a vest and long black pants.

How Elena can look like? I've made a picture of her.
http://halfsteps-neverworld.deviantart.com/art/Elena-Princess-of-a-Lost-Kingdom-433642889


#Role:

Primary: Marksman

Secondary: Assassin


#Stats:

Damage 44 (+3.8 per level) Attackspeed 0.600 (3%) Health 415 (+65 per level) Movement Speed 340 Armor 15 (+2.2 per level) Magic Resist 25 (+0.1 per level) Health Regen 8 (+0.9 per level) Attack Range 200/575


#Abilities:

Elena's resource is Health

Passive - "Collisionhavok":

Elena executes basic attacks depending on the position of her target. If her target is within 250 range of her, she executes melee attacks with her Sword. If the target is outside of 250 range, she sends forth for each 1.000 attackspeed, Varkoz or Hobgir(after 2.000 attackspeed, both) who acts like a projectile, executing a basic attack on hit and returns to Elena. Hobgir and Varkoz will immediately appear from and disappear back at Elena's side.

"Lifeleech": Whenever Varkoz or Hobgir return from dealing damage on basic attack, it heals Elena for 20/35/50 (+10% AD).


#Q - "Order: Stormbreak":

Elena orders Hobgir to go in a straight path of 650 range. Hobgir deals damage to enemy minions/monsters while going through and if it hits a enemy Champion, Hobgir executes a basic attack and the enemy Champion is stunned for 1.5 seconds. (Attackspeed will increase the speed of the Servant) If Hobgir is underway to its target because of a basic attack, this ability can be cast from his current location.

Damage on Minions/Monsters: 45/60/75/90/115 (+20% AD) physical damage

Basic Attack Damage: 110%/120%/130%/140%/150% of total AD

Health Cost: 5% of current Health

Cooldown: 16/14.5/13.5/12/9.5


W - "Twinity":

Passive: Whenever Elena deals a killing blow to a enemy Champion, her ability cooldown's will be lowered by 1/2/3/4/5 seconds.

Active: Elena breaks up the current actions of Varkoz and Hobgir by summoning Varkoz and Hobgir on her side for 3.5/4/4.5/5/5.5 seconds, and increases Elena's attackspeed and also their travel speed when using them as ranged attacks. Varkoz and Hobgir stay at Elena's side, they attack the target simultaneously to Elena with melee attacks or ranged attacks, based on where the enemy's location is.

When W is active and the target is nearby enough for melee attacks, the passive will still work and Varkoz's and Hobgir's basic attacks will heal Elena.

Attackspeed bonus: 15%/25%/35%/45%/55%

Travel Speed bonus: +15/+25/+35/+45/+55 bonus movement

Health Cost: 5% max health

Cooldown: 10 at all ranks

#E - "Order: Soulcollapse":

Elena orders Varkoz to appear at a location 450 range nearby. Varkoz appears on the designated location, slices in a 450 range circle with his scythe and deals 60/85/100/115/125(+45% Bonus AD) physical damage. They are slowed additionaly for about 35% (+10% for each enemy unit hit by the ability) for 2.5 seconds. If Varkoz is underway to its target because of a basic attack, this ability can be cast from his current location.

Health Cost: 5% of current Health

Cooldown: 12.5/11/9.5/8/7.5


R - "Order: Crushpeak":

Upon activation, Elena's next basic attacks within 4.5 seconds, will mark her target for 2.5 seconds. Upon recast, Elena will appear behind the marked target and consumes the mark with the next basic attack made. After consuming the mark, it will deal 100/200/300(+50% AD) physical damage and silence all nearby enemies nearby 450 range around the target for 1.5 seconds.

Health Cost: None

Cooldown: 110/90/70


Thanks for reading and sorry for that much.

9 Comments

The7thKing1/26/2014, 6:28:09 AM3 votes

Thresh :MAJORA! OUR PLANS BEEN DISCOVERED!

great..... now we have to clean up this mess.....

(check out majoras idea, love to see these two have a hatred for each other somehow :3)

XxTSwiftxX1/26/2014, 12:23:22 AM2 votes

Pretty good but her role scares me like how Vayne scares everyone. I personally believe the passive on her W isn't that necessary (given thats she's attacks speed based and the E basic attack/slow gap closer)

Crowe Stalker1/26/2014, 3:14:25 AM2 votes

I actually think this shouldn't be a champion concept, but rather, something you should work on the side. I kind of like the story and would like to see it expanded.

Marksman are inherently assassins that just have a bigger range and more dependance on their auto attack. Putting down her secondary as Assassin is unnecessary (and to a certain extent, actually a lie)

The basic attack animation swap is possible, they've already proven that much with Thresh (his 125 attack looks like he's swiping his scythe down at the target, further than that it still looks moderately like he's attacking normally, and around 400 units he sends out the scythe like a sickle, using the chain.) the two servants seem kind of weird in how they work though...

I'm not sure I properly understand how the Champion works, but I know that I like the concept. Again, would love to see some kind of original work for the world she was in before the League summoned her, maybe as a fanfic? I don't know.

Free4ever221/26/2014, 5:49:34 AM2 votes

THIS IS EPIC!!!item 3031