My first guide!

This is my first guide i have ever made in the time i have spent playing league of legends and i was looking for some feedback on it. Please leave any and all comments on the guide itself and not here as it would make it easier for me to keep up with the feedback rather than bounce between pages. Feel free to add me in game and talk to me there about it as well, whichever way you find easiest. Thank you in advance for any advice or feedback on it.