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[Champion Concept] Watalie the sea hag. hint- another of fizz's race has been found

Superior Seel·4/24/2014, 12:43:14 AM·1 votes·740 views

(Concept Champion) Watalie: Fizz 's best friend went out on an adventure and never returned(watalie). Watalie was trying to recover the stone Garbog which gave its barer untold magical power. Watalie found the stone, but along with Garbog she uncovered something else. A pure black diamond called Ruthicar. Overcome with curiosity Watalie touched Ruthicar, but at the moment of contact dark and evil thoughts invaded her mind. Full of hatred, along with both Garbog and Ruthicar Watalie hatched a plan to overthrow her king and queen and claim the throne for herself. When she returned home she found her city empty, Curious she swam to Bilge Water where she first heard of the league. When she heard that fizz had joined she decided to take vengeance on the last of her kind.

Type: Mage

Role: Mid/Support

Moves:

passive:(energy sap) every level ruthicar grants watalie a boost in ap(15) and mr(10)

q:(play nice) silences and disables champions from attacking(1.5s) cool down (11s) no manna cost.

w: (Garbogs guillotine)a magical guillotine of blue essence is formed and penetrates all shields. cool down (4s) 70mana

e:(impose)immobilizes enemy unit and silencing it cool down 14s mana: 50

r: (Capture) watalie summons the true power of garbog capturing an enemy unit and making it fight for her with 75% increased stats. at the end of capture the unit is dealt 250dmg

Rivals: Fizz

More lore could be added and i would be willing to credit anyone who adds reasonable lore, also quotes would be given credit for as well, any ideas help. :D This is my first idea and i hope it is a reasonable story.

6 Comments

PublicArtillery4/24/2014, 3:41:07 AM1 votes

Great lore, but two silence abilities is a little OP.

Rubitonabuilding4/24/2014, 12:39:16 PM1 votes

that passive. 270 AP just for leveling up. OP.

The kit seems pretty interesting, but isn't very unified, IMO.

A couple of questions:

  1. why is there no mana cost for play nice?
  2. By "penetrates all shields", would that just be for single-person shields like Sion or Riven's? Or would it slice right through Yasuo's Wind Barrier and Braum's Unbreakable? Would it bust through spell-shields? Cause that's a little OP.
  3. Impose is basically a stun. Call it a stun.
  4. Would the ult work on champions, or just minions?

I like the creativity (and I hate Fizz, so I like that you've given him a rival). As someone who makes a lot of champion concepts, I'd suggest you focus on making a more unified kit and take a bit more time to clarify all of your champion's abilities. I hope you don't take it as me hating on your concept, I like it, but I'm just throwing in some (hopefully) constructive feedback. Keep up the good work!

Hyrum Graff4/24/2014, 3:49:12 PM1 votes

Triple-posting a thread is not going to get you more visibility. This is the correct sub-comm to post in, I believe.

Superior Seel4/25/2014, 10:16:22 PM1 votes

i triple posted because i kept adding info that i felt should be included in the general description but this is my last post.

Superior Seel4/25/2014, 10:33:30 PM1 votes

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