About the Glorious Evolved…

RiotThermal Kitten·11/30/2016, 7:08:59 AM·197 votes·15,100 views

Hi. For context, I’m Camille’s narrative writer. I’m responsible for Camille’s VO and I also wrote “The Weakest Heart”, “Tea with the Gray Lady”, and her bio.

I don’t usually post on the boards (we writers tend to be a little shy), but I do read. As the author of the above stories, I want to ease the fears of Viktor fans where I can. I understand it feels crappy to wait in the dark and wonder. My intention in “The Weakest Heart” was never to strip Viktor of his background. Two of Viktor’s core narrative pillars for me are that he is a fervent believer in his cause and that he is a man of science.

On a recent devblog Ant in Oz mentioned the idea of a story hook. I thought ‘evolving’ the Glorious Evolution could be a good hook to dig into with Viktor and challenge him as a character. (Part of building story hooks is also to make hooks we, as the writers who might be using them in the future, want to tell.)

Viktor wants to bring people to his cause. He wants those people who join him to understand his cause as he does. As some have speculated here, what if some of those people see more of the miracle and less of the science? What would a man of science do with that? For me as a writer, that’s a juicy character question to build a story around. (Which is why I didn’t give Camille an aside on Viktor in "The Weakest Heart". I thought it would be a bit cheap to answer it that way versus a story that centered on Viktor as the protagonist.)

I hope this clarifies things a bit and helps Viktor fans sleep better tonight.

119 Comments

Sharjo11/30/2016, 7:15:19 AM74 votes

Oh thank Nagakabouros you came in here ThermalKitten. Hopefully this helps ease some people's concerns.

Also, brilliant work on Camille as a whole. You've written her as well, if not even better than you wrote Taliyah. My hat's off to you!

A Superb Villain11/30/2016, 8:26:57 AM44 votes

It is late, or early (2:00 AM to be precise) so forgive me if I am incoherent.

I, and others, appreciate that you have taken the time to address the concerns some players had regarding the most recent lore developments and their connection to Viktor. I would wager your hook was successful in that when the Glorious Evolved were revealed many, for better or worse, immediately turned to scrutinizing Viktor's possible connection and what it might imply. I think it has been made quite apparent that fans of Viktor are quite defensive of his character as remembered from the early days of League, a sensitivity that is not unfounded considering the uproar that occurred when Jayce's initial lore was introduced. We mean no disrespect, and I hope those who have something to say are more inclined towards critique rather than criticism.

That said, I would like to thank you for Weakest Heart; it is thus far my favorite piece written for League. The story is clear, delivers a plot that is wrapped up by the end while providing a wealth of detail and history that gives it greater depth. I have sympathy for Camille whereas before I doubted it would be possible with how callous her voice lines were. Well done, and best of luck.

Viktorious Sayph11/30/2016, 8:50:23 AM32 votes

If you are going the "people misunderstand him" way, you are in a right way but if you are going the other way, just stop please.

#It's not surprising that people could misunderstand his cause, since even the genuises couldn't figure out Viktor's augmentations because of how much complex it was.

Viktor was and should be left in a neutral state. Nor evil or good, but just science.

Thanks for replying tho :v

MavenSong11/30/2016, 7:23:31 AM15 votes

Im glad someone at riot is commenting on this trying to ease the people. Good to see yall writters do listen.

Also just want to say, very good job on the story, it was very well written and I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work :)

333lom11/30/2016, 1:08:55 PM12 votes

Hello Thermal Kitten, thank you so much for replying! This means a lot, really.

I'm the person who created the first concern thread; a preemptive plea is better than a late one, and I guess we succeeded in getting a response.

I'm sorry if the titles of the threads sounded scary, that's because we ourselves were scared and were trying to get the attention of people infinitely more powerful than us. I saw the hook, I noticed how Viktor's name wasn't mentioned in the Weakest Heart.

We just couldn't have been sure if he indeed wasn't leading these cults, or if it was the case of a preparation for the change of his original lore.

The possible version where he actually disapproves of these cults or even actively tries to disassemble them is very interesting. This builds on top of the established character who is rather reclusive by evolving the ways the world around him reacts to his inventions. These would be in a way consequences of his work which he didn't predict, and with which he has to deal now. This challenges him because in a sense, he's creating obstacles for himself. I very much like the way you created an introduction for a story element, the hook is good! Revealing everything in the same moment would have overwhelmed a story. The way you write** is** awesome.

I would only add this: the third important thing about his character is that he was extremely naive up until recently. And he possibly still is. "The scary Machine Herald is actually naive". I haven't seen this possibility in any other League character, and I believe it does wonders for him. He got his inventions and blueprints stolen from him not once, but twice. He was thinking there would be justice in Zaun (arguably one of the most immoral places on the planet), and he believed Jayce would work with him, even after he became the Machine Herald.

He wants those people who join him to understand his cause as he does.

This is coherent with the way of thinking of a scientist.

Sraeg201311/30/2016, 2:35:31 PM10 votes

Thank you for being that guy.

Riot is very poor when it comes to addressing player concerns and posts like this give me hope it's not all bad.

Now I only hope actions will follow words.

CrazyBear198711/30/2016, 7:26:25 AM10 votes

Hey there.

I'm probably not the person you were hoping to resolve the issue with, since i don't have any issues with your story or the current lore. As just a player, i have no obligated control on what goes on behind the scene's and i wouldn't ask for it. I remember a time when people asked J.K Rowling why Dumbledore was written as "gay" or why Hermione didn't hook up with Harry etc

Story arc's may not alway relate to 100% of your audience, but you shouldn't succumb to their complaints or opinions. I think you did a great job and look forward to see whats next.

To me, League already has the best people working on it's story, art and sound for it's genre, even though it doesn't have to.

Quality takes time, and perfection can't be rushed. We all have to patient and wait for the cake in the oven to baked XD

keep it up, stay strong, have fun

ModAcademy Kayn11/30/2016, 8:46:07 AM6 votes

Your name makes me want to cuddle with you :[

statelesskiller11/30/2016, 8:28:24 AM5 votes

i have said this a few times because it makes sense really

the thing is. we as human will make ANYTHING holy for the stupidest of reason. a silver cross is holy. why? i dont fucking know. crowns made of thorns. the bible itself which is just words on pages. ALOT OF THEM

but then you look at what viktor is doing. a man is dieing because his heart is failing him. if viktors technology gave this man a mechanical heart to keep him alive how hard would it be for the less intelligent to foresee his technology as a gift from god? and him a messiah?

i think that the glorious evolved are less intelligent people construing viktor (against his desire) as a prophet of some "machine god"

Whyte Lyon11/30/2016, 8:20:41 AM4 votes

Inb4 the kind of people that still won't be satisfied with Viktor's lore after it's released. https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-ThOG1kNyics/WBSLcnyT7tI/AAAAAAAAXDM/IGs4aIsr5qU0l02EuvvhlC1Gorr10m_WwCLcB/s1600/32.png

Ask the Herald11/30/2016, 11:02:53 PM3 votes

It's only logical that people would significantly misconstrue the nature and execution of what the Glorious Evolution offers.

Yordleassault11/30/2016, 11:33:43 PM2 votes

Hello Thermal Kitten!

This is important for me, so please, be so kind as to answer! :)

I would like to talk to some Rioter writers about their jobs! This would be an invaluable experience for me because I want to work at Riot as a writer myself and I would like to know what it is exactly like and what do I still need to improve on! If you guys really don't have much time, then just a couple of minutes would be priceless for me too! I can give you my email address, my Facebook, my Skype and even my current writer blog's link if that helps in any way! Please reply, at least with a quick yes or no.

Thank you!