Looking for a PLAT or DIA player to critique and give tips to my gameplay.

Kinguin2K·3/10/2015, 2:25:49 PM·1 votes·1,534 views

I have been stuck around S3 for awhile now. I have a decently high win rate, but lately have been going on a bad streak of losing. Whether it be AFKs, trolls or just plain bad kids. There has been times I have been outplayed in lanes or jungle, but that has occurred less than the other 3 issues. I know that the only thing I can do is improve my game, so I am looking for someone to watch me play (or coach for free if they feel like it) and just point out things I am doing wrong and what I can do better to increase my win rates. I mainly TOP, MID, and JUNGLE efficiently. My ADC isn't what it used to be so I could use many tips there. Feel free to message me on here or add me. Again I am just looking for someone who will help me improve my overall game so I may get to gold and maybe plat by the end of the season.

Top Jax Fiora Chogath Irelia Olaf MID Annie Ahri Chogath Zed Leblanc JG Amumu Fizz LeeSin Vi ADC Draven Jinx Graves Supp Blitzcrank Thresh Sona Nami

25 Comments

MrPerson103/10/2015, 2:42:06 PM2 votes

Climbing works a lot better if you simply spam 1 champion over and over. For me, it was Katarina mid, went from B3 to Plat I- Diamond V promos within 2 months or so.

I'm assuming since you're stuck in Silver 3, you're still struggling to master CS - start there and understand that CS is the most effective, efficient, safe and reliable way of getting fed

Commando Yi3/10/2015, 3:12:26 PM2 votes

figure out the sequence of events that lead to each of your deaths

bill trbl3/10/2015, 3:37:29 PM1 votes

One thing I've noticed that helped my gameplay improved was play passive and focus on cs. I main ad carry and I used to be super duper aggressive. I noticed that my cs improved by a lot when I stayed back. I usually wait for the enemy to make a mistake and capitalize on it. Sometimes the enemy gets anxious and try to force a play. Same w mid and top, you just gotta know when you're the strongest to make the best out of it. tbh soloq is all about op champs like these diamonds player said. I remember in season 3, BT + Caitlyn were the op as hell. I climbed from 1212 elo (season2) to platinum in season 3. I played cait 90% of the time.

DestructoDave3/10/2015, 5:47:31 PM1 votes

I can tell you one thing you can stop doing. Blaming your teammates, crying, threatening to report them, and asking everyone in all chat to report X because they didn't group when you said so.

Considering I played with you last night, and all you did was cry and threaten to report, and ask for reports in all chat, and generally be a big baby over a little pre-game lobby banter.

Here's a pro-tip: People have zero incentive to help you win a game with you threatening them with reports, becuase you dont think they are grouping enough to your liking. You aren't the boss in a game. Just because you go suicide, and are looking at the grey screen trying to find someone to blame for your death, doesnt mean you are right.

I'm sure anyone reading this thread already got that inclination when you said "bad kids."

DestructoDave3/10/2015, 6:49:26 PM1 votes

Actually, I wasn't toxic in game. I said about 3 things total during the entire game. And, thats not what you said; the only person lying is you. I argued with you pre-game, but I didn't say crap in game. See, I think you thought I had you muted, but I didn't. That was just leona's advice; for us to mute each other. So, I saw all the crying you did, and all the chat report spam you did.

Bottom line is, I went positive, 5/2. You died 9 times, tried to find someone to blame for it. Look at your KDA over the last 20 ranked games; its negative. But its all these kids faults, like me, while my kda over my last 20 games is positive. Go take a gander at our stats and compare.

You didn't wreck fiora. What makes me laugh, is you didnt group or help for the first 25 minutes of the game. When you finally started grouping, you started dying, and then looking for someone else to blame for your 9 deaths, and here we are.

I didn't single handedly lose anything; I was the only person on the team with a KDA over 1. I also had the most CS on the team, while you had 125 cs in a 34 minute game. But hey, its all these trolls, afks and bad kids that keep holding you down amirite? Was all my fault we lost that game, even though I had 4x your kda, 60 more cs, and 7 less deaths. Keep dreaming.

Its just guys like you annoy me, coming here blaming your entire team for your troubles, just like you did in game. Blaming me for every mistake you made, and reporting me when YOU were one of the main reasons you lost that game; not me. Especially when we look at the stats over the last 20 games, and see its not the kids making you lose, its you making you lose. Luckily, I played with you and can call you on your BS.

turtlecoon3/10/2015, 6:55:51 PM1 votes

You play way too many champions, and way too much ARAM.

Pick 2-3 champions and spam ranked like a dog.

DestructoDave3/10/2015, 7:16:51 PM1 votes

Lol, so I snipe a guy with my ult from spawn, and I sit there from 20 minutes in? Yet, somehow I get 60 more cs than you do.

Let me give you a run down of how this game went. First 20 minutes of the game, sej and leona are blaming you for not grouping. I guess you dont remember that part. They complained and blamed you, becuase fiora was coming bot/dragon, and you werent. Flash forward 5-10 minutes, they start blaming me for not grouping now. Even though, the 2 times I died, was in team fights, at dragon. The thing that made it funny, was I was helping leona kill thresh, at dragon, I get fiora/akali'd, die, and then sej says I was nowhere to be found. I died at the dragon pit. But again, this is where I'm going with this. You started chiming in now, blaming me for not grouping, mainly because you started showing up and suiciding, and dying, and looking for "kids" to blame. I never died solo to anything. my 2 deaths happened at the dragon pit, in team fights. But hey, I wasn't grouping.

You completely missed the first 20-25 minutes when these 2 were jumping on your case for not grouping. Leona was fishing for reports. I didn't say crap in game. She and Sej had been crying about grouping the entire game; first blaming you, then blaming me later.

Keep making your case by calling me a kid this entire thread. I posted here, because I saw your name and instantly remembered you as the Jax I played with last night, who refused to support pre-game, and then proceeded to cry and threaten to report all game, and ask in all chat for reports, because you started dying. And the only reason I posted, was because of you blaming your team for all your troubles, with your constantly negative kda's, your toxicity crying for reports (you do know threatening to report people is toxic right?) and your generally bad play.

I hope a plat and diamond does spectate you, and watch you fail. That way, maybe you get a reality check on why you are losing, and its not these bad kids and trolls, its your 120cs in a 34 minute game, with a 1.3 kda. Oh, and that is a typical score for you, if you go by your last 20 ranked games.

I gave you advice; considering I played with you. I said, stop blaming your team, stop threatening to report them, and look at your own score. But, you keep blaming the only positive stat players on your team for your troubles. Just annoyed me seeing this thread, when I just had to deal with you last night. Because, if you read it, it sounds like poor pitiful you, getting all these trolls dragging you down, when i witnessed YOU dragging you down, not me, not the team, YOU.

Kinguin2K3/10/2015, 7:39:01 PM1 votes

I already said I wasn't perfect if your literary skills even came close to surpassing your terrible game skills. I hope they do shred me so I become a better player which is all that I am asking. I do not however accept your critiquing because you are still below me and have never broken S4. Please refrain from posting on my thread anymore. You are wasting my time and yours when you should be seeking more help than I. I will not read or respond to anymore of your petty seeking self. Good luck in the future and I hope you are on the other team sometime.

DestructoDave3/10/2015, 8:43:32 PM1 votes

Terrible game skills, huh. Here I'll tell you what. Add me to friends. We will have a contest who can get gold first.

If you beat me to gold, I'll gift you a skin. If I beat you, you can gift me a skin, OR you can come here and tell everyone how horrible of a teammate you are and you are sorry for blaming your teammates and threatening to report them all game for your failures.

I'm leaning towards option 2, since I would like you to have to come here, and apologize for the kind of player you are. Pretty sure I'm gonna win, since I have more kills than you, less deaths than you, more cs than you, and I've been gold before on a top lane only account. But hey, I'll stick with this role.

So how about it? We see which one of us gets gold first? I'll add you. After that you can apologize for blaming me for your troubles, and apologize to the forum for being full of crap. And if you beat me, well I'll send you a skin.