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What personality would a demon based on evy have?

Terozu·4/21/2018, 5:04:50 PM·3 votes·4,463 views

I'm making a demon champ concept, a female based on envy, she looks human and takes the place as the wife of important people, and feeds on people who show envy of her position in society.

My cirrent problem is giving her a personality that matches the idea of someone who can be envied, and giving her fitting quotes.

The only quotes I know i want are taunt responses and a couple of interactions with Evelynn and the other succubus champs (Zyra Eve Ahri). Specifically: Taunt responses for general taunts- "Is that... envy~ i detect?" Evelynn taunts "I am porcelain and perfect, that floppy hair of yours is sloppy."(a reference to Whitney Avalon's Snow White vs Elsa rap battle)

And a taunt towards succubuses. "I can't judge you for being a succubus, I can judge you for looking like a slut."

Towards Evelynn "Don't chase your prey darling, it's unladylike." "Let them come to you, not the other way around."

My biggest problem is that I want her to inspire envy, without making her seem overly prideful, like the Tahm Kench confusion.

Her current design for anyone interested.

https://imgur.com/UAu62oy

16 Comments

FloRaider424/21/2018, 10:56:05 PM2 votes

I like that an Envy demon actually is supposed to be the target of Envy and not envious herself like it usually plays out.

Since Envy can mean to desire anything another person possesses she could flaunt things she can do that other champions might want to.

To make her less pridefull, but still desireable, maybe she could act spoiled and take things for granted that other champions would long for.

Pantheon "I think I was the wife of a baker once, or a baker myself, ... it got boring"

Zed "My revolutions were a lot... quicker, but don't worry you will suceed... maybe"

Sejuani Ashe Lissandra "Why are you three fighting for one throne? Just take one each."

Azir "Nothing is more rewarding than walking the lively street of your own empire"

Cassiopeia "Could you please transform back into a human when we talk?"

Viktor "I give up. You only have eyes for the Piltover boy Jayce ."

Poppy "Completing a daunting task is such a good feeling. You familiar with it?"

What is the Tahm Kench confusion though?

Fasmodey4/21/2018, 5:27:58 PM1 votes

I think this demon would make many compliments that ends negatively.

Example

Towards Evelynn:

"Ah the pain you bring, like a scorching fire upon thousands of screams. Such a waste on unbearable slut."

I mean, can be better, but you get the idea.

TheHobbits4/21/2018, 11:14:32 PM1 votes

I like the idea of drawing envy from people people rather than being envious itself, but Im not as big a fan of the 'the wife of someone important' aspect.

There are more ways to make people envious than just "Oh I do wish it were me married to the high ranking Man".

What if this demon killed and replaced an individual, assuming their identity and doing everything they can to be the best at what they do. A guard that taunts the prisoners who are envious of his freedom. A beautiful woman that those less so wish they were. A rich fat man buying all the food, eating it in front of the poor leaving none for them.

If you wanted to run with the sexy demon lady that last example could work too. A fine woman that can eat and eat and not gain weight would certainly cause most other women to have a reaction (though I'm not sure if it would be necessarily envy)

Zyranium4/22/2018, 3:34:27 AM1 votes

So basically Envy is Jealousy, it's sometimes represented by a snake...

This bring to the idea of a shapeshifter "reptilian-like chameleon" that can take steal identities and abilities, why not some money too ha ! Envy is also portrayed as an Eye that can't stop looking at things and most importantly at YOU, so why not a sly tricky demoness with a bitter and soured personality, a truly calculated verbal woman who can't stop spitting her poison at you? With snake-like features and not like Cassiopeia she will remain mainly humanoid, and she can thieve you, take your identity, make you're existence obsolete while she's walking with your body envelope and will mock you in a very derisive way.

Some combat skills are welcome, but I can see her as a ranged demon who wields two sharp snake-like whips, she just can't stop lashing at you until you're just a piece of meat and will walk away laughing and spitting her poison at you, with verbal attacks and mockeries, a truly savage demon that can attack you personally and make you feel miserable...

Talking about snakes, and demons, I can't stop thinking of this picture :

http://www.spiritofthescripture.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/5994318261_0a9296d1df_b.jpg

This is basically... Eve... yeah.. Turning away God's commandment to not touch the fruit of knowledge, but she was tempted by the Serpent in Eden itself ! So.. Temptation, is having desires. It could be really funny in a way !

So after this inspiration, I was thinking about a woman who can control you, and make you tempted by things, not just by her, but she can make you force to have desires towards something or someone, a manipulative kind of woman that can control you're mind and body with only her powerful words. So basically she's bewitching you, just like Satan did with Eve in the Genesis.

Even if I like your ideas, I don't see how a demon will look for a "social" class and interactions with humans, only if its not for feeding their thirst of human emotions. So the "wife" thing, is basically.. not correct, because this is a trait of Elise who only seeks beauty and youthness and betrayed her husband for a higher social class, human society for a demon ? They don't care much about it !

If you look for a succubus or femme-fatale demon, you should distinguish her from others like : Evelynn Ahri or Zyra

For more exotism, let's put a third eye on her forehead, and no, those ideas are not sponsored by reptilians !