Jhin Fan Fiction Idea

I've thought about this for a long time, and I finally feel ready to approach the community with my idea. I have been musing over a fan fiction novel for Jhin as a pre-story before his hitting the Rift, involving Ionia, Shen, Zed, their father, and other characters in the timeline. I want to share my prelude, which I have attached in a link, and I would love to hear feedback and ideas from everyone in the community to see if this would be something people would actually want to read. Please enjoy it, and let me know what you think!

• Jhinstant Death