Can Secondary Characters be LESS useless? Case Study of MF, Fiora, and Taliyah

Darrosh Jewfist·5/1/2016, 8:50:16 PM·38 votes·5,112 views

I finally got around to reading Taliyah's preview lore and Fiora's long lore. While I liked certain aspects of Taliyah's lore and I couldn't find much to like in Fiora's long lore, I'm going to focus this post solely on the topic of secondary characters.

In short: every secondary character introduced so far is_ trash_. Utter _trash_.

**First Look: **MissFortune 's Rafen

Rafen probably has the most lines out of all the secondary characters I'm going to looking at today, but what infuriates me about him is how much Riot attempts to use him as a jobber and failing poorly in that. In case you're unaware, in Pro-Wrestling (WWE, John Cena, Hulk Hogan, The Rock) a jobber is a wrestler whose job is mainly to make other wrestlers look 'strong'. Basically these guys tend to have one-dimensional personalities and serve little more than being another notch under one's belt. Now, this can be done successfully to catapult certain wrestlers into uber-tier strength (like Brock Lesnar's win over Undertaker) or horribly (Roman Reigns v anyone) or just plain damn cool (Ambrose vs Triple H at Roadblock).

But here, Rafen fails horribly at being a jobber.

>“I have faith in these and in us,” she said. “What else are you carrying?”

>“This cutlass has kept me safe through six Harrowings,” he said, tapping its pommel again. “I offered up a bottle of ten year old rum to the Bearded Lady and this knife here was sold to me by a man who swore its edge was purest sunsteel.”

>Miss Fortune glanced at the scabbarded knife, certain without even seeing the blade that Rafen had been swindled. The workmanship around the quillons was too poor to be Demacian, but she wasn’t about to tell him that.

In this instance, you see Rafen being proud of his purchase of a sword. Okay, that's cool. This is probably one of the few instances we see of Rafen where he actually has some agency outside of MF's lackey work. The problem? MF basically shoots down her subordinates success by saying he got scammed.

So how exactly are we supposed to feel confident in this guy's strength? Every scene Rafen is in basically has him asking 'well as you...'-type questions to forcibly advance the plot of be generally useless.

Rafen - Example #1:

>“You know any secret ways out of here?” asked Rafen.

>“No,” said Miss Fortune. “I want to fight that bastard.”

>“You want to fight the Shadow of War?”

Rafen here isn't being a character, he's being a plot device. He doesn't have his own motivations or agency. He's literally there to ask MF what the writer at the time needs explained.

Rafen - Example #2:

>“Cutpurse Square?” said Rafen. “How did we get here? I ran this place as a wharf-snipe. Thought I knew every way in and out like any good little thief.”

>“Not every way,” said Miss Fortune.

>The counting houses on either side were silent and dark, and she resisted the impulse to look through the torn sheets of flapping canvas nailed over porthole windows.

>“How do you know these routes and I don’t?”

>“Lady Bilgewater and I are two of a kind,” said Miss Fortune, her gaze narrowing as black mist seeped into the square. “She whispers her secrets to me like an old friend, so I know her every hidden wynd and jitty like you never will.”

Here we are shown again how Rafen isn't as good as he thinks. MF simply outshines him everywhere. There's nothing in anything from the two stories in Shadow & Fortune or Burning Tides to suggest Rafen is notable at... anything.

He's a weak jobber because he hasn't been built up to have any strength or agency on his own. He has no distinguishable characteristics. He has no hallmark moments. He's just... no better than a nameless grunt.

Second Look - Fiora 's Brother Ammdar

>“My lady,” said Ammdar, her second older brother, handing her a mid-length rapier with a bluesteel blade upon which light moved like oil. “Are you sure about this?” >“Of course,” replied Fiora. “You heard the tales Umberto and his braggart brothers were spreading in the Commercia?” >“I did,” confirmed Ammdar. “But is that worth his death?” >“If I let one braggart slide, then others will think themselves free to wag their tongues,” said Fiora. >Ammdar nodded, and stepped back. “Then do what you must.”

Yet again, we see a secondary character doing little more than ask questions to the champion of the moment. Ammdar has no agency. He's just there to pad and fluff up Fiora and give her an excuse to explain whatever the writer needs explaining at the time. The dialogue is horrendous in that respect. It's not about two characters going back and forth - it's just one fluffing up the other.

It's boring and painfully cringey when you notice this.

>“How many is that?” asked Ammdar, coming forward to collect her sword. “Fifteen? Twenty?” >“Thirty,” said Fiora. “Or maybe more. They all look the same to me now.” >“There will be more,” promised her brother. >“So be it,” answered Fiora. “But every death restores our family honor. Every death brings redemption closer.” >“Redemption for whom?” asked Ammdar.

No lie, but I think Ammdar asked more questions than he had_ actual statements_ in this lore.

Final Look: Taliyah's ???

Okay, it's Yasuo .

Honestly, he was cooler when he didn't have a name. I thought we were getting an actual secondary character that wasn't a useless bum. But surprise surprise, the moment we realize he's a champion he slice and dices some stooges like nothing.

tl:dr - There isn't a secondary character that has survived the Retcon with any personality, agency, or abilities. They're all champions or about to be.

52 Comments

Pyrodinium5/1/2016, 8:58:30 PM11 votes

I know.

It is almost as if they were focusing the development on characters that are actually relevant to the game or something.

:^)

UomoAfide5/1/2016, 9:23:09 PM11 votes

So, you're saying that secondary characters working exactly like secondary characters and being outshined by the protagonist is something weird?

Blue Moon Wolf5/2/2016, 4:45:50 AM10 votes

MonkeyKing:

  • One dimensional personality (loves to fight)
  • Makes MasterYi look stronger by getting trained by Yi

... my god... I main a jobber .__.

GreenLore5/1/2016, 10:20:54 PM8 votes

Well keep in mind that fioras story is her color text. It is something to show off her abilities and her skills,so it makes sense for her to be the one thats in the focus of the story.

Frosty Hoodoo5/2/2016, 8:12:29 PM6 votes

Oh what irony for Rafen. Rafen is not just Miss Fortune's first mate. Rafen was also described as someone who was great at stealth and information gathering which is why Miss Fortune made Rafen her first mate. Basically a Spymaster was Rafen's role. However he gets shutdown repeatedly in his own role and turned into a incompetent buffoon.

What would have worked in those stories for instance is Rafen's sword is real sunsteel. Sunsteel actually hurts the spooky harrowing creatures like Hecarim. Unfortunately his sword broke in one of the skirmishes. Without his sunsteel sword he becomes much weaker. Which also leads to credence in Rafen being very skillful with a sword and gives his character some actual weight to throw around in his boast of how he survived six harrowings.

Its these type of things that help make a secondary character look better.

Like lets just take the characters from Avatar the Last Airbender. Aang is the main character of the story within Aang's group. Toph, Zuko, Katara and Sokka are the secondary characters of the story within Aang's group. Momo and Appa are the tertiary characters of the story within Aang's group.

However what helped so much is that Toph, Zuko, Katara and Sokka are not always portrayed as weaker than Aang. Often these characters were Aang's equals or betters (shifts between the two). A bad story would have had Toph eventually become not even an equal to Aang and had her resign herself to that of the role of a tertiary character that was no better than Momo or Appa. Even Sokka who was portrayed as an equal to Aang or tertiary character at times. This is because his character was struggling to do impressive things when his talent came from his very smart strategies which helped them out of several situations despite not being able to manipulate any elements.

Lt Streko5/2/2016, 5:03:22 AM5 votes

As a writer myself, I find your points to be spot on with the characters. Any of the characters that aren't a playable champ in LoL feel really one dimensional, and generally fail to move the plot in a meaningful way, or feel impactful at all. +1

Ebonmaw Dragon5/1/2016, 8:57:55 PM4 votes

Rafen survived a direct attack from Hecarim.

Rafen is the best.

yeulx5/1/2016, 9:00:26 PM4 votes

Already raging on taliyah.. rip

Karma Deified5/2/2016, 2:55:58 AM4 votes

Yeah, I agree. That guy Gangplank in Illaoi's lore was so poorly used.

TBakes5/2/2016, 4:27:15 PM3 votes

Yeah, Rafen is like the Donald Trump of secondary characters: "I've survived 6 Harrowings with this sword. The sword is awesome. Trust me. I'm a great fighter. Very loyal. More loyal than all of Miss Fortune's other mates. If I were a playable character I would be unbeatable. You don't win anymore. You don't win Normals. You don't win Ranked anymore. You don't even win ARAM. Make me a character and you will start to win every game. These other champs are losers." Then you try to find in the text where he actually does anything and find yourself scratching your head. What did this guy do again? Why does MF even respect him? His sword is a fake. He doesn't know the streets. Why does everyone like him? Everyone knows the name Rafen, but once you put his actions under a microscope your view of him quickly diminishes...

Biff Manly5/2/2016, 2:44:57 AM2 votes

What about ol' One Arm from Amumu's lore? He's pretty neato.

Shen's dad is another good example, I'd say.

Beyond Legends5/2/2016, 2:12:10 AM2 votes

...I'm amaze how this even have likes? Like who the hell like this crap...Well I'm going to assume it's just multiple fake account by an idiot or 18 people needs to get their brain check for idiocy.

TeCoolMage5/2/2016, 2:27:56 PM1 votes

I agree in all your analyses except Taliyah's.

I think all secondary characters should have power regardless of their status as a champ. If Rafen was really good at navigating Bilgewater and had a cool blade that made him able to kill as many undead as MF, then I'd be glad either way but from a game design point of view, simply being good with a blade isn't enough for unique gameplay.

Story and playability should be completely separate, with champions serving as secondary characters to even non-champions depending on context and story. I think they did a great job with Yasuo being a secondary character, Taliyah being the main character, and Azir being the antagonist. Meanwhile, Azir is sort of the protagonist in his own lore (but Xerath has yet to be anything but antagonistic. blegh.)

What I didn't like about Taliyah's story, however, was the fact they easily killed a bunch of guards. I'd be fine with two, but trivializing generic characters is just plain wrong, it makes them look like gods and detaches them from any sort of reality except from challenges set by other champions. (similar to MF vs the shadow isles champs)

EROTIC RAID BOSS5/2/2016, 10:42:46 PM1 votes

if they were on MF or fiora's level, they'd be legendary- like the rest of the champions in league. its a collection of the truly exceptional.

it would be nice to see some characters that are interesting and aren't champs, but I mean, that's kind of a nice secondary goal after giving the actual champions lore

Scarborough Fair5/3/2016, 7:57:55 AM1 votes

Apparently everyone has forgotten about Rek'Sai's Aelon