MF Voice Line Experimentation

So in light of the recent Miss Fortune VO threads, I did a bit of experimental writing so see if I could hit the right mix of flirty, dangerous, sexy, and in control. This version of Miss Fortune is a leader solidifying her grip to power, disdainful of her enemies, prone to a bit of playful mockery, yet flirtatious (sometimes even playful) and not afraid to reach out to potential allies -- even if it means playing friends against each other.

This is by no means a complete concept, but I'm curious to see if people think this direction captures both aspects of Miss Fortune well enough that it might be worth exploring further.

Illaoi (First Interaction) -- What did Gangplank do for you that I can't do better? -- You're right, Illaoi. There's a new queen in Bilgewater, and change is good. -- I hope you're over him, priestess. Bilgewater is. -- I warn you, priestess: I don't break easily.

Twisted Fate (First Interaction) -- Twisted Fate, you sly dog. How much of Gangplank’s booty did you get away with? -- You cut a dashing figure for a card shark. We should...play. -- Come on, Fate. I could use a right-hand man, and you know you can do better than Graves. -- You’ve always sought Fortune, Fate. Here I am. Feeling lucky?

Graves (First Interaction) -- Come on, Malcolm. I could use a right-hand man, and you know you can do better than Fate. -- Gangplank scorned you, but I know value when I see it. -- Cross me at your own risk, outlaw. I’m faster on the trigger than you think. -- Don’t run afoul of fortune in your quest for it, Graves.

Gangplank (First Interaction) -- Not a soul mourned you, dog. -- I hear the sharks have had a taste of your flesh, captain. Shall we give them the rest? -- An iron fist, Gangplank? How tediously cliche. You never were one for subtlety. -- Well look what the wharf rats dragged in. -- I'll put a bullet in your skull next time, Gangplank. -- Not even death wanted you, I see.

Firing Double Up -- Bang -- Catch -- *kissing noise*

Double Up Champion Bounce These lines are mostly mocking, sardonic lines. MF is playing around here.

-- Like fish in a barrel. -- Gotcha. -- Kaboom. -- Should have dodged. -- Too easy

Critical Hit with Double Up or kill with bounce These lines are much more serious, even when identical to the lines above.

-- Should have dodged. -- To easy. -- Bullseye. -- Right betwixt the eyes.

Kill -- Dead already? -- And down he/she/it goes. -- Shame. I liked you. -- Anyone else? -- Like an anchor.