Some thoughts on Viktor.

RiotDinopawz·12/9/2016, 6:11:39 PM·41 votes·7,527 views

Hey folks,

Well, looks like the latest bios have got a lot of folks worried about Zaun’s very own Machine Herald!

The first thing to say is that it’s great to see so many people leaping to the defense of this misunderstood(?) genius. The second is, to borrow a phrase from the late, great, Douglas Adams… Don’t Panic.

The perception you’re getting of Viktor is largely from Jayce’s bio, and if ever there was an unreliable narrator, it’s him. Sure, from Jayce’s point of view, Viktor might seem like a complete and utter psychopath, bereft of a moral compass and utterly devoid of humanity. But what of Viktor’s point of view? Might what’s he’s doing be entirely misrepresented? Might there be a good reason behind it (even if what he’s doing might be - from outside perspectives - be seen as reprehensible?).

The reaction is also likely coming from people reading about the place Camille visits in her short story, but I can imagine Viktor’s response to seeing what those people are doing in his name… I can imagine him being incensed at this perversion of his grand philosophy, this naive, quasi-religious cult that has grown around his ideas and which has - to him - woefully misinterpreted his vision. Viktor plays the long game and knows that greatness cannot be achieved without cost. Does that make him evil? Perhaps to the folk who pay the price initially, but what of the folks who’ll reap the benefit in the long run? What will history say of Viktor? That’s the legacy Viktor is concerned with, not the fragile, emotional and short-sighted people around him.

So, no, we absolutely don’t want to paint Viktor as a pantomime villain, twirling his metal mustache, but nor do we want to turn away from the dark deeds he’s doing in the name of his Glorious Evolution. When Viktor’s bio lands, it’ll provide balance to the perception. Will it reveal the truth? Well, it’ll reveal Viktor’s truth, and the reality will likely lie somewhere in the middle. Perhaps shrouded by a fug of the Gray, but, hey, that’s Zaun for you…

Dinopawz

68 Comments

Sharjo12/9/2016, 6:18:21 PM22 votes

Thanks for popping down Graham, it's always good to have you guys around and I think the very notion of you guys just coming her to help reassure the populace is very much a positive thing.

I'm also wondering if you're the one who's the primary writer for Viktor with his updated lore. Eh probably a better question for when Zaun lore pops down, so I'll ask a different one; did you write Caitlyn's lore this time around?

The Anagram King12/10/2016, 2:34:29 AM14 votes

First off; thanks for opening up a potential conversation channel here, DInopawz. I hope this is more than a hipfire post, because your reassurance post implies that there really COULD be a conversation to be had, here.

Let me preface by saying; I understand that fans asking(/demanding) Viktor's character to BE what they see him as is pretty obsessive. And probably something of a joke between you guys. ( ;p )

But you're very subtly deconstructing the perception of a character who is utterly beguiling.

The Jayce narrative doesn't paint a picture of perception. It paints 2 or 3 "Hrm,so those dead bodies weren't killed by him//For the EVOLUTION!" Viktor personality traits - even before Vik's own transformation. It paints Viktor as the desperate scientist who turned himself into a robot to escape death; rather than the depressed academic who rent his own flesh to prove his worth.

So there are a few lines in your post:

  • "Might there be a good reason behind it (even if what he’s doing might be - from outside perspectives - be seen as reprehensible?)."
  • "Viktor plays the long game and knows that greatness cannot be achieved without cost. Does that make him evil? Perhaps to the folk who pay the price initially"
  • "What will history say of Viktor? That’s the legacy Viktor is concerned with, not the fragile, emotional and short-sighted people around him."
  • "[we do not] want to turn away from the dark deeds he’s doing in the name of his Glorious Evolution"

This is EXACTLY what the vocal fanbase was worrying about, Dino!! :P

Viktor was never interesting because of a ["Justified Dark Deeds"] philosophy. He was interesting because he began so innocent, idealistic and naive. He was interesting because the contrast of what he became - at least in the eyes of others - was so stark to the man he once was. The most human of all of us; crippled by his emotion, discredited by his idealism, denied the support of those he'd supported.

He withdrew from his life; leaving everything he ever worked for behind. And he turned his research on himself. He became obsessed with redemption - maybe even revenge - but that's not how it turned out.

While replacing his body and organs, Viktor had an Epiphany. This wasn't just about him. No - the implications were societal in scope; maybe even global. His obsession for redemption may still have persisted; but if it did, it was funnelled into an obsession to change the world. And when this obsession reached the eyes of the public, it was worrying; maybe even frightening.

Viktor - if not because of his change, then certainly because of his isolation - spoke differently. He spoke fervently. Of the future; of potential - like a damn street preacher. People flocked to him and accepted his message. They became MACHINES; and they started worshipping him as the "Machine Herald" (whether he acknowledged it or not).


#What I Projected onto Post-Transformation Viktor


(bias ahead)

Original Viktor painted a picture of a man slowly losing human traits - piece by piece. Isolated and left to his own devices, even post-transformation. Driven by ideals that noone else comprehends. Driven by a vision that is preached as salvation.

Viktor could bend. Viktor could twist -his personality had already done so in the past. And though he'd not done anything 'bad' yet, his personality and ideals were shifting day by day. He could be a philanthropist one day; and a hand of his own perception of "Justice", the next. He could offer "salvation" one moment, then punish those who doubt his vision by leaving them to rot in their slums and die.

Viktor could be "transcending" human morality and government. Not necessarily for the better. And with a "cult" on his side, he would have unconditional moral support for any choices he made.

Stealing Jayce's crystal? This could have worked, were it not for the fact that Vik apparently already had a huge facility + following, completely functional and was his FIRST "bad guy" act (it just straight-up felt weird to invade people in foreign cities while trying to display the merits of Evolution, y'know? :P).


#So what's the problem with the direction of New Viktor?


New Viktor is an entirely different character. He has different ideals, a different personality and spends his time studying in Piltover:

  • New Viktor begins his story obsessed with human evolution. That right there takes away from the humanity and idealism contrast that was see in early Viktor's old lore.
  • New Viktor has a very obviously closed mind; focused on his perception and potential. ("My future is the RIGHT answer!") Selfish > selfless.
  • New Viktor is kicked out of the scientific community for being too evil. Seriously? :P
  • New Viktor commits his amoral Jayce confrontations BEFORE his transformation (having a human being bad; but a robot being passive and good is not fun. We want him being morally grey LATER. Practical Example: Battlecast Universe. We LIKE future "evil" speculation.)
  • New Viktor would KILL Jayce, as a man, just to keep things tidy. Unless the perspective twist, here, is something like:

Viktor "Nuh uh, I said DON'T kill him! Jayce just misheard me that's the twist!"

  • New Viktor also doesn't seem particularly (originally) interested in justice or philanthropic endeavours. This is compounded by the fact that Zaun is no longer where he studies (might still be where he grows up, though). He's no longer a "good egg in a bad basket" - he's just a cracked egg that makes robots; and may crack a little more as time goes on.

#Closing Thoughts


The Machine Herald and the Creator are two distinct personalities - working in tandem one day; and opposition, the next.

The first, a promise of a future that he has envisioned and obsesses over, daily; The Second, a machinist whose designs will saturate the world - for better or worse.

Viktor should be one part deep philosophy, one part questionable motives. He does not need to be killing Jayce to justify a rivalry. The mere fact that he outfits his machinations with weaponry could be frightening, enough. In fact, you could even use the 'free will' argument here!

Viktor "Their weapons will primarily be tools for self defense. When threatened by physikal force, they will gain akcess to their arsenal; exklusively for nonlethal purposes." Jayce "You just EXPECT them to not go on a rampage when threatened? What if they're threatened by a thunderstorm?!" Viktor "Of Kourse not. They will be unable to intentionally kill another human or machine. Choices to do so will be overwritten." Jayce "You're... you're messing with their free will?" Viktor "I am restrikting only the use of lethal force. It is a kondition for akcess to these upgrades. Other kognitive processes shall remain intakt. The organic mind makes mistakes. We must strive to limit the scope and reach of these mistakes. The augmented are, after all, not quite so **frail **as your kind."

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Viktor needs to be frightening for the POTENTIAL things he will do. He needs to be less "cold" and logical; and more "luke-warm" and logical. He should care. He should think, deeply - his vision, after all, relies on his introspective thoughts; and he can think faster and more deeply than any biological human (super processing!)

HE knows he will not take away free will. HE knows that this is limited to a super-weapons agreement.

... But we don't.

This is the kind of misunderstood Viktor I would like to see; and not one who exclusively performs 'dark deeds', "for the greater good". Seeking to improve society through stealing, smashing, killing and generally causing chaos isn't, after all, the trait of misunderstood innovator. A child can grasp the crazy in that worldview - there's nothing ambiguous about it at all. :P

Viktor should do questionable things - but there should be more tact involved than Doctor Doom super-villain tropes. His positions should be much more thought out than Jayce's. His ideals should be much more refined, than his detractors. He could make mistakes; and resolve to improve his thinking - sometimes simply refining a once immoral (or amoral) idea so as to mesh better with human society. This, alone, has fantastic story implications. Imagine the Free will Argument above, only AFTER Viktor had already tried tying weapons to panic.

Jayce is afraid that Viktor's stubborn attempts to provide his followers with weaponry will cause another Augmented citizen to go on a massacre; but if Viktor's design truly IS flawless, then what he says is completely feasible. Most notably of all - those equipped with the weapons have agreed to his terms.

Jayce is in the wrong. But he is RIGHT to be afraid of the consequences of this kind of manipulation.

333lom12/9/2016, 7:09:29 PM13 votes

Pushing Viktor into the zone where "he sacrifices some people for the greater good" will hurt his character. I'm certain you've seen the poll on reddit - 90% of people don't want Viktor as a villain.

If Viktor does a single wrong thing, he looses his gray morality. He becomes a villain through and through. A sympathetic villain, but still a villain. Like Xerath. Xerath killed thousands of people in the city, cackling doing so. And your description of Xerath is that "he also has his point of view". Now you say the exact same thing for Viktor. Not to mention that you intend to make his new lore from his perspective, instead of it being subjective like his original one.

What made us love this character was the fact that he turned on himself out of anger, desperation and hopelessness. He proudly created the first free-willed robot in the world, who was meant to clean Zaun. This person is not gone from the Machine Herald. Don't erase this person. He looks scary, but he never did anything wrong. That's the catch. He looks like somebody who would, but his greatest crime up to now was a theft of a crystal. As one of my friends said, up until now, his bodycount was 0! A 0! This is very important!

And a part of my comment from elsewhere:

This is the point of my post: there are concrete points that can be drawn from Viktor's original lore. This brand new Jayce's lore steps on many of them, altering Viktor's personality drastically. And I'm not even talking about the corpses with their scalps sawed and skulls hollowed out. This can be revealed from Viktor's perspective to be different, but here are the points that cannot be altered by perspective:

Viktor working for Piltover means he never got the chance to fall into depression and have the moment of epiphany. The new lore also has Viktor explaining about his glorious evolution and augmenting other people even before he went into depression. This destroys his character in every way. This means that he always wanted to remove free will, that he didn't start the evolution on himself as a way of self-improvement, and that he never experienced the character-altering hopelessness after Blitzcrank got stolen.

Now if we remember his original lore, in it it is very clearly shown, and very important, that he was a naive student in Zaun who got his ideas and inventions stolen. This caused him to fall into depression. He didn't give up though, and he rebuilt himself. So the point of the evolution in the original lore is completely different than the one in the new lore. His motives are changed, even if he in his eventual new lore doesn't appear as villainous as he did in Jayce's.

Edit: I know I sound angry, panicked, harsh. I swear, I am only scared. I can't stress enough how this character is slipping into the villain zone without anyone even noticing. Of course he isn't going to be a cartoon villain! But this just means that he'll likely be turned into a "villain with a tragic backstory". This is still a villain, not a gray character. Readers will say "aww poor him", but then they'll nonchalantly still want him to loose.

Edit2: Blitzcrank is very important in Viktor's lore. **Pididly **as well, as the thief of Viktor's plans and creations. I've written somewhere... that having your intellectual property stolen, versus being expelled from a foreign academy because your friends was a snitch, have drastically different effects on the character. The first pushes Viktor into desperation and hopelessness. The second can only cause a need for revenge.

ElectroScalar12/9/2016, 6:54:25 PM12 votes

Hello, thank you a lot for creating a response thread.

I am glad to hear that Jayce's lore is indeed through his lens. But we already expected this in a way. The problem lies in the parts that stay the same, regardless of the POV. I'm at the end of my wits as I've listed many of his characteristics made clear by his original lore. And the

but nor do we want to turn away from the dark deeds he’s doing in the name of his Glorious Evolution"

scares the hell out of me. Why? Because there's a long history of this exact same thing being said with the character actually comitting objectively bad things, and only seeing them as good in their own heads.

Viktor is not an immoral person. How do we see this? By the fact that he didn't go for revenge. Even not after Pididly, the man that ruined his life. We also see this in the fact that Viktor started his Evolution on himself, not on others! I know where you're heading with his new lore.

Perhaps to the folk who pay the price initially

That’s the legacy Viktor is concerned with, not the fragile, emotional and short-sighted people around him

This is the definition of a maniac who pushes the goal of world domination as the only version where "people can be happy". Viktor should be in the gray morality because his technology is so advanced, that nobody can see that far in the future whether robotic bodies will be good or bad. Because he's on the edge of madness, but he never actually crosses the line. This is his charm. Not the "oh well he does some good things but also some bad ones". This is not a good character development. He should have character development where he's constantly struggling with himself, not "killing people who disagree". Why? Because he's a scientist whose main goal is to better the world. Killing is counter-intuitive to logic, and he strives for the perfection in logic!

Please realize this! Reconsider the lore update!

333lom12/9/2016, 8:05:32 PM11 votes

And just another point:

(Viktor is) not concerned with the fragile, emotional and short-sighted people around him

Yes he is. He's exactly concerned about them, because the point of the Evolution is to help people never be hurt like he was. He was fragile and emotional. He wants to expand people's horizons. Not kill everyone who opposes. He does this in the Battlecast AU. Not in the real timeline.

Hellioning12/9/2016, 7:45:39 PM10 votes

And if I hadn't remembered what happened to Xerath, I might even believe you. He went from an amoral character to cackling villain with a tragic backstory. Whether he 'has his own point of view' or not, Xerath is still obviously a villain. A villain you might be able to sympathize with, but still a villain. Viktor seems to be heading down the same road.

The fact of the matter is, even ignoring Jayce's PoV, there are several indisputable facts about new Viktor. He was expelled instead of leaving voluntarily, he expressed lack of interest in free will, and he's not even the first complete human-to-metal transformation in the new lore. None of these things are good changes, in my opinion, and the third just seems like an insult. Viktor's entire shtick beforehand was augmenting humans to bypass their natural limits. Not only did the changes to Piltover/Zaun mean that he's no longer special in that regard, he's falling behind in his old primary goal to Orianna's father, and Orianna herself. Obviously, this is because he has a new goal, but considering that most people considered his transhumanism fetish to be his primary trait, is it really a good thing that you're replacing it?

I understand a lot of my complaints are due to things changing. I'm honestly not a big fan of lore's retconning everything, but I concede it's going to happen anyway. I just hope it happens in an interesting way instead of Leona/Pantheon/Fiora.

midnight oil2412/9/2016, 6:13:37 PM9 votes

Oh thank god, Riot has come to put an end to this madness. Plus, Riot recognizes that Jayce isn't a reliable narrator. This is a great day!

Hats off to you, Dinopawz

Nefas12/9/2016, 6:44:53 PM8 votes

As someone who didn't see the Jayce lore as necessarily quite as bad for Viktor as others, Riot's lore group hasn't earned the trust needed to do stuff like this. You have a very clear history of making mustachio-twirling villains out of characters with established lore and tossing that lore aside to the deep chagrin of players, including specifically Viktor before, as well as more recently Xerath. It's fine to claim Jayce's POV story as unreliable narration, but the people who are very upset about Viktor see the same faults in the much more omniscient background biography that seems like it should be more neutral.

There is a very bad tendency at Riot to take a champion's lore every few years and completely re-write it even if they have a backstory that works in the new lore world, even if that re-write completely destroys their previous motivations and history. That destroys players motivations to connect with lore and champions. There are established expectations about most champs - it's not a playground. You should absolutely stop rewriting other champs as a part of a different champ's new lore - Viktor, Cass, Xerath, many more. You haven't made up for mistakes in the past, of which there are many. You haven't earned trust. Therefore you shouldn't expect it from the players.

Ask the Herald12/10/2016, 5:20:27 AM8 votes

I still remember when, at the time of Jayce's original bio that first painted Viktor as a hypocritical saturday morning cartoon villain, some Rioter (I forget who, maybe Runaan?) said somewhere (I forgot where, maybe a Reddit ask thing?) that what had been intended was that Jayce had stolen blueprints from Viktor and that Viktor was basically trying to get them back (forcibly, I guess), and that the only reason he looked bad about it was that Jayce made it out to be as if HE was the one stolen from.

To this day I can't help but wonder how their dynamic would have been if that had gone through.

Ralanr12/9/2016, 6:26:30 PM7 votes

So effectively you want Viktor to be a darker shade of grey?

I wish good luck to whoever is working on Viktor's lore because Viktor's representation has been a taboo subject ever since Jayce was originally released. So far it's been handled well by revealing that Jayce is just as smug as he looks, but understandably people aren't going to be confident with Viktor's representation.

I look forward to it regardless. If all Zaun lores are revealed at the same time, Viktor's will be the first I read.

333lom12/11/2016, 9:10:06 AM6 votes

This is a very big problem that's contradicting Viktor's original lore - and that's the now grafted friendship of Viktor and Jayce.

Viktor's lore was supposed to be personal and objective, without the interference of other unnecessary characters. There is no real reason to force a friendship into the lore. It only causes problems which Anagram King explained in detail.

Going by the original lore of Viktor, there is nothing that he and Jayce wouldn't see eye to eye about. Viktor never had an idea to improve humans in any way before his depression. The idea of the Evolution is so impactful exactly because he came to the idea after surviving a tragedy.

If Viktor always wanted to modify humans, that just turns him into a cracked egg among rich eggs, instead of a good egg amongst bad eggs, as someone had described. Please pass this info to the worldbuilding team. Dare to change plans. Dare to change Jayce's new lore. Dare to save the characters.

Finikksu12/10/2016, 6:13:18 PM6 votes

Viktor is one of those champions that I'm sh*t at using, but I love the concept.

One of the things I always loved about it, is how one of his line ("Steel can fix all your flaws") can be interpreted many ways.

I always saw Viktor as the kind of guy who everyone would just see him as a Maniac who loved machines and saw humans as only flawed pieces of meat. But inside all he wanted was to fix people and helped them improve. I always thought of Viktor as the kind of "villain" that if saw a person who cannot walk, would give them robot legs; someone is missing an arm? take a mechanical arm; a person is blind? bionic eyes. He would go "fixing" people with what he knows best, Technology and Machines. But as everyone feared him by the stories told by those who didn't trust him (Jayce...) wouldn't let him do it. Only those who gave him a chance would understand what he really wants, and so would follow him in his quest and try to help him, only to be seen as more maniacs.

That is what I always saw of Viktor, from his old Lore and in-game quotes, that is how I understood him... maybe I just was being overly hopeful and Rito's lore team only thought of him as a simple villain...

Chromatic Eagle12/9/2016, 11:24:28 PM5 votes

With all due respect, with the way you say you're intending to write Viktor, why didn't you try this approach with Xerath? His old lore in a way is like the magic version of Viktor. Why not Trundle? He was a sympathetic character before Riot turned him into a brute who sold out his people.

Leona is Waifu12/9/2016, 6:30:51 PM4 votes

Thank you for this. I also wanna congratulate you all on the quality of the Piltover update, since all that's seen is criticisms of the Viktor lore. P.S. Can we get some more Leona lore up in here?

HalfTangible12/10/2016, 6:38:01 PM3 votes

Now, I'm not a fan of Viktor. I don't dislike the guy, but I don't really care for him either. So take what I'm about to say with a grain of salt.

The big problem - the thing that I think really killed the "maybe Jayce is just wrong" argument - was the issue of free will.

First, the diving suit. Someone pointed out that this could potentially be part of a lore update for Nautilus, which in that light does sound intriguing and cool, but keep in mind this event occurs before any notion of the 'Glorious Evolution' has entered Viktor's head. Vikky and Jay make a suit for the dock workers that is essentially a diving suit, and it works great. Then Viktor proposes an additional chemtech device that would strip the user of their free will, and treats it as a betrayal when Jayce goes to their superiors and it gets him fired.

Then, in exile from Piltover, he takes the brains out of people and turns them into robots that obey his every command. He literally made the cybermen from Doctor Who. This is capital E cartoon Evil.

And then in Jayce's story we see that Viktor sent more mind-slave chemically enhanced cannon fodder to kill Jayce.

Now, if it were any one of these events alone or presented a little differently, I could believe Viktor had a psychotic break, made a mistake, or even that some of the people involved were actually willing. Viktor's charm came from thew fact that he saw his desire for revenge as a weakness and attempted to expunge it, so I could see him initially making the mistaking of following through on it. But this whole sequence of events together paints the picture of a man who has no concern for the well-being or free will of others. He's set out to "fix the world" in the same manner that psychotic super villains in bad comic books do.

On top of that, in Jayce's bio we get a brief moment where we see into Viktor's head. That implies that - even if Jayce isn't completely reliable - he's at least paying enough attention that the general events herein are correct.

Having a villain that thinks they're doing the right thing doesn't make them morally ambiguous or interesting in and of itself, especially if you can't see it their way. It's true that there's no such thing as mustache-twirling cartoon villains, but that doesn't just mean 'lol he thinks it's okay lol'. They justify their actions in a manner that the audience can understand, and potentially even agree with.

As for how history will remember him?

That's literally how Doctor Doom justifies himself :P

SpikedFruitPunch12/10/2016, 8:18:44 PM2 votes

What will history say of Viktor?

History is written by the Viktor Viktor

DeathBurst12/9/2016, 10:28:21 PM1 votes

When Viktor’s bio lands, it’ll provide balance to the perception.

Then why not release both Jayce and Viktor at the same time, instead of grouping Jayce with Cait, Vi, etc.?

IWantToDieLMAO12/9/2016, 7:37:11 PM1 votes

So it's going to kinda be like Handsome Jack from Borderlands? [slayer-jinx-wink]