The Ryze TU
http://www.surrenderat20.net/2015/03/311-pbe-update.html#ryz1
THE PREVIOUS TU HAS BEEN FURTHER UPDATED. HOWEVER, I STILL FEEL THE POINTS IN MY THREAD APPLY IN FULL.
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-R8NksS2o24I/VQNGpnNC_-I/AAAAAAAAmGw/7RaN0N61wdI/s1600/ryze3waycompare.jpg
Disclaimer: I understand this is PBE. However, since it's PBE, I feel the need to provide feedback to help solidify a preferred direction from someone who really enjoys Ryze's character.
I really don't think this is the direction you should be taking for Ryze's Texture Update. I think this TU has violated a lot of the things that made Ryze, "Ryze," and I've listed them here.
- Ryze's runes are a CRITICAL part of his character! Now you can barely see them on his flesh - which is why he goes shirtless to BEGIN with - and the runes on his scroll look like they were written an hour ago with water! Nothing about it looks enchanted!
- Ryze is supposedly a magical being, who's abilities scaled with mana for a reason! That's why his flesh is blue - He's a magical being who became so by filling every pore of his flesh with magic! His current shade of blue looks more of a* "powder blue"* than a "mana indigo."
It's easier to see his runes now, but I personally feel it's not quite enough. There should be some means of emphasizing them.
Other thoughts:
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I don't really like the 'pale blue vs darker colors' thing going on. It looks too edgy and it detracts from Ryze's emphasis on a "natural" sorcerer as opposed to an "educated" wizard or mage. The brown hides suit him well, though perhaps a slightly darker color palette is in order.
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His eyes don't glow as much. I think they should glow brighter to emphasize the powers within.
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His ear-rings should be a brighter color - I'm sure your artists wouldn't be able to stand leaving it as it is, but it should be said.
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I kind of like the crimson writing on the scroll. It makes it look truly accursed and worth sheltering from evil hands. Just what did they use to write that...? Blood...?! Who's blood?! Perhaps if you darken the red script, and make it look sickened black/corroded at the edges of the writing it will really drive the whole accursed thing home?
5 I guess) Not feeling the eyebrows, mayng. Personal opinion, but I think he looks cooler without them. : ^)
Notable Comments: http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/HJEskEkd-the-ryze-tu?comment=0002
http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/HJEskEkd-the-ryze-tu?comment=00120000
http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/HJEskEkd-the-ryze-tu?comment=0002000100010000
http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/HJEskEkd-the-ryze-tu?comment=000e
http://boards.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/story-art/HJEskEkd-the-ryze-tu?comment=00050000
I got these tattoos in rune prison!
Yeah, that's okay, Ryze, I understand your pain. My joke doesn't make any sense either.