Aatrox new story: The cage
The start of the story reads,
"Darkness.
The breath I cannot take plagues me.
It is an emptiness in my lungs and throat. As if I had stopped mid-breath, and then held my lungs cruelly waiting. My mouth open, throat hollow, unable to pull in air. My chest, the horrible tension on my thorax.
My limbs and muscles refuse to move. I cannot_ breath_. I am choking. The pressure builds. The stillness spreads to my chest and limbs. I want to scream, to tear at my face, to wail—but I am trapped. I cannot move. I cannot move"
Like come on riot, less than 10 lines in and you already can't spell the word breathe? I mean you've already used breath twice, at that rate you should know the difference. This is what editors are for, jesus. Multi-million dollar company can't even proof read their shorts.
