[SPOILER] Ryze's Biography - Improvement?

Gary B Enkelis·8/20/2016, 7:35:02 AM·1 votes·1,353 views

"Ryze looked into Yago’s face to see that it had been transfigured into a scowling visage—that of a fiend, no longer recognizable as the man Ryze once had once known."

Source: http://gameinfo.na.leagueoflegends.com/en/game-info/champions/ryze/

Would "as the man Ryze once had once known." read better as: "as the man Ryze once had known." or "as the man Ryze had known once." ?

I wasn't sure where else to ask this / point this out.

Did anyone else catch this or am I wrong or does it not matter?

8 Comments

RiotBioluminescence8/21/2016, 4:11:36 PM2 votes

Took me a moment to work out what you were saying, but ABSOLUTELY.

The doubled up 'once' instance is just a typo. I'll let the guys know.

Ryze looked into Yago’s face to see that it had been transfigured into a scowling visage—that of a fiend, no longer recognizable as the man Ryze once had once known.

(My personal preference will be for it to change to "...the man Ryze had once known.") Good spot!