Shadow and Fortune: Chapter One
It's here folks! Beware the Harrowing! Take a read and enjoy!
Also included is Kalista's long lore, complete with the Invocation short!
It's here folks! Beware the Harrowing! Take a read and enjoy!
Also included is Kalista's long lore, complete with the Invocation short!
Tune in every morning this week (Wed/Thu/Fri) for the rest of the story and see how the terror unfolds...
Well, that just made my week.
Loving this story so far.
To clarify for folks, this is Dinopawz, A.K.A. Mr. Graham McNeil himself, and if I remember right he's the primary writer behind Shadows and Fortune. Everyone say hi, he's new around here!
{quoted} Everyone say hi, he's new around here!
"Ah... fresh meat."
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"RGRAAAAAAAAHHH!!!" (That's my line!)
wrong game! go back to the nexus!
#--and see how the terror unfolds...
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May I add that in the future that all events be remastered and redistributed systematically each year? Included with this idea is resetting the 'story content' webpage's story chapters to re-tell the event-story to people. Yes they can just read it all somewhere on the internet (Wiki) but it would also indicate which stage the event is at.
This idea and this idea together = Stage set for 20 years.
Poor Olaf. Soon pretty much everyone in his vicinity will be dead but him.
he just pops out of the kraken again...
"what did I miss?"
I am so surprised and so happy he's in this story. He's one of my favorite champions!
: WHY WON'T I DIE!?
Wait, now that Olaf's at the Harrowing we only need Sona to pay them a visit and Pentalkill shall rise from the Black Mist!
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Wait, now that Olaf's at the Harrowing we only need Sona to pay them a visit and Pentalkill shall rise from the Black Mist!
I didn't realize I wanted this. Now I do.
Now we know who Bilgewater's savior's going to be! They're going to keep the Mist at bay through the power of Heavy Metal!
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Now we know who Bilgewater's savior's going to be! They're going to keep the Mist at bay through the power of Heavy Metal!
And the world shall tremble before the Brazen Gods of Metal! :-)
Don't tell me you have a metal song ready for every situation o_O
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Don't tell me you have a metal song ready for every situation o_O
I'd be disappointed if that WASN'T the case.
Yeah, that would be unforgivable. XD
Which would make me the unforgiven
Can I be unforgiven, too?
Congratulations to Bioluminescence, the dead canary in your survival kit made into lore.
That said, spooky stuff. Too spooky, perhaps; I'm ready to visit someplace a little less grimdark than Bilgewater now. Seventeen dead is just a slow evening, fishing grubs pulled from a corpse's sockets, men hung by a skewer in their jaw?
Nope. I'm good.
Let's go someplace nice, like... Ionia? No, that's occupied by Noxus. Demacia? No, no... I'd hate to be hung for jaywalking. Nox- Hah, no. Shurima? Not bad, but the neighbors in Icathia aren't so accommodating. Freljord? Stuck in a civil war, but at least they have Braum. Zaun? Eh... I'd rather not donate my body to science while I'm still living. Plague Jungles? Not with a name like that. Mount Targon? I don't like hiking.
Piltover? 
You know what, forget it.
Come on and revel in the undoing!
World domination isn't possible if everyone is dead!
Whoever holds dominion over the damned shall rule the world. No one in their right mind may think themselves capable of standing against the vicious Revenants. Soon only the dead shall remain
I swear by all that is evil and unholy, if I must save the world to rule it properly I am going to eat my silk top hat, bow tie and all.
Now that would make for very short-lived entertainment. Hue. :^)
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Congratulations to Bioluminescence, the dead canary in your survival kit made into lore.
Woohoo! I just noticed that too and I got the biggest grin on my face. Pretty sure that's not the appropriate response to realizing what's coming, admittedly, but hey. I'll take what I can get :D
(To your other point - maybe Bandle City?)
I am not sure, every Yordle seems a bit... unstable.
Who knows what dreams of horror those fluffy furballs entertain.
Hey! Us Noxians aren't all that bad. :\
hides knives
Olaf owns. Illaoi sounds like she's going to be awesome. LadyPlank Priestess is supremely my shit. Looking forward to this.
“No. She knows me,” said Miss Fortune. “I heard that her and Gangplank used to...you know?”
“Really?”
“So the scuttlebutt goes.”
I MUST KNOW WHAT EXACTLY THAT ENTAILS, BUT THEN I DO NOT BECAUSE I DOUBT THERE IS ENOUGH BRAINBLEACH TO RESTORE MY SANITY.
- Going to take note of that idea.
This may be Rito's best work yet. It is time for Lucian to kick some ghostly ass! http://i.imgur.com/ZyHKsyG.gif?Noredirect
This is amazing! Now we know what the coming champion will look like and who she allied with. I love the first chapter's lonesome man too. Whot, Miss Fortune's name is Sarah!!??
Dat lore doe. Really really well done Jaredan and Ant in Oz.
It's been revealed her name is Sarah since she came out..
Let him have his moment? :P
This is amazing! Now we know what the coming champion will look like and who she allied with. I love the first chapter's lonesome man too. Whot, Miss Fortune's name is Sarah!!??
Dat lore doe. Really really well done Jaredan and Ant in Oz.
Fortune's name has been Sarah since she came out.Next you're gonna tell me you don't know Shauna is Vayne's first name
They are one of today's 10,000 (XKCD link), and we should celebrate that. :)
The problem I have with the lore is that it is way too long and spells out everything. No one cares about Karthus as a child -- they care about what he is now. A single sentence or two about his past would have been fine. Shortening the stories down to 1/3rd or 1/4th of what they are would have done wonders.
We get it, you want to flesh out the world, but so many times in storytelling the old adage is still true: "less is more." Leave some to the imagination, give hints to the full story, don't just state it all out.
Hush, some people actually like these little details and quite enjoy delving into the pasts of our most beloved champs.
Personally I like to understand why my character acts the way they do. For those that don't care, they don't have to read it, but for those of us that want to understand a character's psyche a little better, it's nice to have.
Exactly my point. Why cater to those who don't even "like" lore? That's why the client lore's pretty much only a fourth of the extended lore, to give some people a rough understanding of the champion's background. If it sparks a flame of interest one can quickly find a well laid-out format of one's favorite champion.
It's honestly one of the best possible solutions.
Rather than force things down your throat and making super intimidating walls of text from the get-go, Riot's leaving the door open and saying "Hey, if you want, you can come in and join us!". Only THEN do they give you the walls of text, those glorious, glorious walls of text!
Ahh... We should build a shrine to those texts. A real Wonderwall for us to worship!
10/10 would bow before the glory of the Wonderwordwall.
Except having everything spelled out removes a lot of mystery and eloquence. Do you want a story where every single thing is told? That is boring.
Good story telling knows what to leave out. These tales are way too over complicated. Who cares that Karthus's mom died during childbirth and he was raised with his father? That doesn't matter in his current development.
Little details like these will explain the character though. It gives us insight in who he is. Also the Shadow Isles have had a lot of speculation and mystery around them already. Everything being a mystery is also boring.
Well done mystery is not boring. If they know how to hint at things and leave subtle clues it is intriguing. Instead it is just way too drawn out. What are we going to have next? Karthus's childhood diary entries? Mordekaiser's dinner plans? Kalista's favorite colors in order?
There are amazing settings that paint huge pictures while being vague about things. Look at the Planescape setting in D&D as an example. They explain a lot, but leave so much out, with subtle clues given here and there. That is good world building. Instead we get seemingly direct accounts about the childhood of people -- how does anyone know that who is still living? How is it not just rumor and speculation instead of stated fact? Just seems like poor writing and story telling to me.
Consider this the reveal afterwards. All mysteries with no reveals gets tedious. It would actually suggest the writers not knowing what the answer is when they make the mystery. It's a good way to lose fans.
We currently are in a world-building stage again. The whole old world is retconned, the new one is being treated as a blank slate. You need a base to speculate from.
There's enough champion backgrounds that're vague and mysterious. It gets repetitive and can easily make the champions feel distant, even though we directly play them in the game and they're the main focus of things.
Mystery is fun. But there's a time and a place for it. Incidentally, have you read the Journals of Justice? They did quite a couple of mysteries I believe.