Aurelion Sol lore hard to read

I really enjoy the "Exploring Mt. Targon." Pantheon, Leona, and Diana had great stories that were so well written they felt cinematic. Aurelion Sol's story however, went in a different direction. The sentences, mostly due to the rambling word choices, failed to produce a smoothly flowing narrative for me. Additionally, I understand that Aurelion Sol is supposed to be a high-level entity, but I found his second passage really hard to visualize and relate to. It's the only section in all of the series that is written in first-person, and again features that rambling quality. I admire the fact that Riot includes SAT words in its writing, and challenges us to knock the rust off our reading parts, but good words require good writing to make for good reading.