[Champion Concept] Greagory, The Father.
lore: Greagory was once a famed boxer who fought in the underground dueling rings within Noxus, he never cared much for his homeland, nor did he care to leave, though when his wife died unexpectedly, he left his boxing career to care for his eight year old son, Tyler. one night they were attacked on the street, the criminal went for the weaker first, killing Tyler, little did the criminal know, just how bad of a decision this was, watching his son get killed before him, Greagory was filled with rage, with speed and precision he attacked the criminal, then with rage he began to beat him to death, he let out his rage until he had killed the man, than nothing but depression was left, letting his utter depression take him. little did he know that in giving in and letting his sorrow consume him he would lock his son to the mortal realm, to exist as a ghost. knowing he brought his son back on accident, and now constantly reminded of his son's death, he could never let go of his rage or depression. with resentment towards noxus, he now roams the land seeking a way to end his sons wandering of the mortal plain so that he can move on to whatever realm awaits. as it does with many wanderers, this pursuit eventually lead him to the institute of war, and the fields of Justice.
Passive. Depression/Rage. In place of a mana bar, Greagory has a rage bar, built up with autoattacks, rage fuels some of his abilities. the more rage he has, the faster he attacks. Visually, when his rage is empty, he has a more balanced stance, and his punches are based on precision. as his rage fills up, he takes on a more rugged stance, striking faster, giving into his rage.
Q. Dash strike. Dashes in a direction, if an enemy is hit, he strikes for half his auto damage and gains rage equal to damage dealt. (does not consume rage)
W. Sudden Outburst. Stuns an enemy in auto attack range for 1 second, during this 1 second he empties his rage bar halfway, punching them. number of punches depends on level of ability and how full his rage bar is. Visually he would crouch, then lightly tap the bottom of their jaw, lifting them for the second stun.
E. Cleave. Instantly slams his fists together in a pincer clasp on a single enemy, does low damage, and knocks back. knock back is based on how full his rage bar in. consumes rage to cast.
R. Blade of despair. drawing a ghost version of the blade the killed his son, he dashes to a target enemy, striking them for low damage, and marking them with true sight for duration of ability, during this time, Greagory does a % of damage based on how much more health he has than the marked enemy. (like reverse giant slayer).
Role: top lane bruiser, Jungle bruiser, or a bottom lane tank. his build would be based around health and auto-attacks. since his ult would not do much damage if he built purely ad/auto attack. though he would still be able to do a bit of damage with his ult if he built tank, but only to a single target.
I welcome any ideas, what you like/dislike about this character, whether you think they are balanced or not, please discuss.