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Klein, the End (WIP)

Derpifier·3/14/2017, 6:44:23 PM·2 votes·1,393 views

This isn't WIP anymore I just can't change the title. ;(

CCOS Reviews Torrance, the Last Son of Zaun by The RLver KLng Mor Brume, Crux of the Isle by Arakadia

For looks think of Klein looking like Reaper from Overwatch or Death Gun from SAO but without the guns but a metallic fist. (Got it? Okay, good.)

Champ Concept: An immobile mage that excels at Damage-Over-Time burst effects, and has controllable areas such as Skarner.

Lore

"Many have tried to destroy everything, but they have all failed. Urogma Klein is the first to destroy an entire universe. He is the most wanted man of all time. Bounty hunters and mercenaries have attempted to find him, but never return. Some theorize that Klein uses a scientific force to slowly, but surely destroy everything in a single universe. This force is called Vacuum Decay. Urogma puts everything in an entire galaxy at the most stable place it can reach, while doing this, a burst of potential energy shifts everything nearby, creating more potential energy. This eventually leads to the entire universe to be engulfed by a massive, destructive field of energy. This is at least what scientists believe Klein does. The first documents of the end of the universe are here. Quote:"

It all came within minutes of the warning. A red wave of death. It swept over everything, within a half second, everything was destroyed. I don't know what it was, but it couldn't be natural. This had to have come from the most evil area in all of space. It, it took everything. I watched as the home I once knew was destroyed within a second. It kept spreading, crackling with energy. It spread in all directions. I... I just can't live like this anymore, afraid that this could be the next universe that... that, gets destroyed. You should have seen it! Everything I had known, gone in a second! It's coming for us! It's coming for us all! Everyone will die from the Expansion."

"That is the only known documentary of the so-called Expansion. If anyone sees this, you must immediately head to the nearby Expansion Awareness Centers and report it. Reporting is saving, please don't let this universe be next."

Boots stomped along the metal floor of the Morgandi Shuttle Center, the center-most city of the universe. A hooded person blended in among the inhabitants of Morgandi, with their gloomy, depressed lives. They strode somewhat faster than them though, receiving curses when they bumped into someone. Upon reaching the Universal Chamber, several guards asked for identification.

"Your name and security number, sir?" the guards asked in tandem.

The man looked up as he murmured. "You don't know my name?" His glowing blood-red eyes stood out against his dark grey robe and metallic skull-like faceplate. The guards stumbled back.

"Requesting backup! I repeat - requesting backup! Sector 304, Universal Chamber!" Sirens wailed at the request. The man dodged their bullets with ease, seemingly shaping his body to avoid getting punctured. He leaped up, like a metallic goo, and slid between pipes. The two guards put their backs to each other, searching the walls and ceiling. The man dripped down from the ceiling, oozing like a monster he had seen before. Hardening his body, he swept the guards, knocking them out.

"You can't die yet. No, not yet." The man grinned as he strode towards the Chamber. When the reinforcements entered the Sector, they could see red-white electricity shooting through pipes. They glanced at each other fearfully. When they reached the Chamber, more electricity was shooting out of the main control panel.

"Why, hello!" A seemingly insane man yelled while the control panel behind him sparked and shot electricity throughout his body. "You men and women are the first to see your universe die like the last: A big, red... Expansion!" The man pulled a metal glove onto his hand, and plunged it to the ground. As the guards tried to retreat, they were disintegrated by the ever-expanding pulsating red ball of death.

"Two down, infinite more to go."

Kit

Passive - Higgs Field: Klein attempts to destroy the universe by making everything go to its most stable point, with a bang! He can't do this if there's no stable area, though. On the map there are 4 (Twisted Treeline + Howling Abyss) to 6 (Summoner's Rift + Crystal Scar) Stable Areas on the map. Each one generates power, feeding Klein. If he has 2 (TT + HA) or 3 (SR + CS) areas controlled, he begins to pulsate energy. The energy allows Klein to use his ultimate: Vacuum Decay. If all of the Areas are controlled by Klein, the Expansion shall commence! The pulsating Expansions will pulse outward, expanding across the entire map from the Areas whenever Klein uses an ability, dealing .5/1/1.5/2% (+1% AP) of each enemy champion's max health. Scales on levels 1/6/11/16.

Klein gathers the power from these Stable Areas faster than other champions.

To clarify, the Expansions occur from each Stable Area and occur like ripples of water.

No Cost 0 second cooldown Type: Passive Bonus Gathering Speed for Klein: 100% (Double)

Q - False Vacuum: Klein smashes the ground with his fist, dealing 80/110/140/170/200 magic damage (+60% AP)(+75% physical damage) and applying a stack of Decay. Each stack of Decay on an enemy will deal 30/45/60/75/90 magic damage (+10% AP)(+15% Physical Damage) to them over 3 seconds. Maximum 2 stacks at a time. Duration resets whenever an ability is used.

As Klein's primary ability, it can be hard to hit, but when paired with Sweeping Strikes and Vacuum Decay, can deal massive damage. Klein will always want to Q before using R, as to get the most damage possible from the damage over time.

350 units around Klein 50/55/60/65/70 Mana 8 second cooldown Type: AoE from Self 3 Second Stack Duration

W - Ooze: With his body transformed by the Expansions, Klein can transform his body at will to become a gooey substance for 1.5 seconds. While he is in this form, he can not be disabled by CC and is untargetable, but takes 40/35/30/25/20% more damage from AoE attacks.

Klein will want to use this ability sparingly, as it makes him take more damage from AoE attacks.

65 Mana 20/18/16/14/12 second cooldown Type: Self

E - Sweeping Strikes: Klein sweeps enemies in front of him, knocking them down for 1.1/1.2/1.3/1.4/1.5 seconds, and dealing 70/90/110/130/150 damage (+50% AP)(+35% Physical Damage). If Klein uses this ability while in his Ooze form, he instead sweeps all around himself. 2 charges.

Klein's only CC, which may be hard to hit, but if landed can be followed up by massive damage from his Q and R.

About size of Camille W 45/40/35/30/25 Mana .5 second cooldown Type: Cone AoE in Target Direction; AoE around self 10 second charge cooldown

R - Vacuum Decay: When Klein has enough power, he can cast Vacuum Decay. Vacuum Decay deals 7.5/15/22.5% (+1% per 100 AP) max health to each enemy in damage. Each Stable Area contained by Klein reduces the cooldown by 5 seconds.

Because of the fact that Vacuum Decay can be hard to hit, it has such a short cooldown and deals so much damage.

350 units around Klein 20/30/40 Mana 30 second cooldown ( - 5 for each Stable Area after the required amount of Stable Areas needed to cast Vacuum Decay) Type: AoE from Self

Klein has a voice similar to Reaper from Overwatch, or Death Gun from SAO.

Quotes

Upon Pick

Let the Expansion commence!

Upon Ban

How fortunate they are...

Game Start

Link Start! I feel this realm's power... Finally, a new universe to burn.

Moving

I move, such as the Expansion does. Where I wish. Where I go, decay follows. Heh. Oh sigh, how boring this is, moving. I don't roll out, I stretch out. Oh, why a flour pun, quite nice. I am the Expansion's creator. The first of many. We go as one. Don't hold it against yourself.

Attacking

(Strained punching noises) My fist is the end of all. I would end you with this glove, but I don't punch too hard, because I want to see you burn. Don't try to run! The beginning of the end... is now! Oops, I missed your skull. Did I hear something break? Like bones? Or were they your dreams? I punch too hard? Just you wait. All will feel pain soon enough. No pain, no gain.

Death

Death is.. inevitable. You got me, Aurelion. At least I fulfilled my wish.

Jokes

I can punch. The life out of you. Don't flex uncontrollably again, oozy body. Did you just assume my gender?

Taunts

Better luck in the afterlife. If a space reptile can't stop me, no one can. Oh, I'm sorry for what I did to your family. Not.

Upon gaining half your Stable Areas

Yes, I can feel their power. I'm halfway there... oh my, this was easier than expected.

Upon gaining the majority of the Stable Areas

Almost there. Just a little.. bit.. closer. Just a few more.

Upon gaining all of the Stable Areas

It's happening. Nothing can stop me now! Let the Expansion commence!

Losing a Stable Area

No, no! It can wait, yes it can. Only a setback of the inevitable.

Using Q - False Vacuum

Burn! You haven't seen real terror yet. This is my style of roadwork.

Using W - Ooze

This is both a blessing and a curse for what I've done. Who else can do this? I just can't put my finger on it. Literally. Try to stop me now!

Using E - Sweeping Strikes

Woops, you fell. Need a leg? Bow before me!

Using R - Vacuum Decay Real terror! How's 'bout I rework the universe? This is how I end everything.

Taunting an enemyAurelionSol

If you couldn't stop me, who can? Why do you try? Didn't you say you love the fire? Enslaved by Targonians? How disappointing that must be. Do you still have your scars? I sure do.

Taunting an enemyBard

Take me to your next universe. How do you do it? Together we can rule the galaxy.

Taunting an enemyBrand

The world didn't end in fire, the universe did. I like your style. But mine is better.

Taunting an enemyEkko

Time travel? Take me to the end of time. I want to see if I'm the one ending it.

Taunting an enemyMalzahar

Prophet? Tell me if you're going to die today. How about which universe I'll destroy next?

Taunting an enemyTryndamere

There is nothing undying, everything will die by my hand. Literally.

Taunting an enemyVi

You and I, we go together well. Punches, knocking people down, becoming unstoppable.

**Taunting an enemyZac **

Ah, there you are. Where have you been all these years? Your DNA is the reason I'm like this. Thank you. I created you, why do you wish to end me?

6 Comments

Dabrick013/14/2017, 9:25:05 PM2 votes

I love the destroyer of universes and SAO vibe you put into it. I don't play much Overwatch, but Death Gun gave me a good idea of what you want him to be. I'm assuming he would build tanky AP like Swain as he is normally going to be within a fight. He is almost like the yin to AurelionSol's yang. He destroys while sol creates. Definitely room for lore references and secret interactions.

I like the idea of a person using primarily AOE damage in a fight. His kit is neat and original. His Passive, W, and Ulti are what I'm concerned about.

He does not need the situational slow from his W if he can build a tanky AP item in the form of item 3116 and have the slow constant instead of 1.5 sec only. It is not the best item, but it would be good on him due to his ticking, AOE abilities. Here is my idea for it. He does the goo thing, but all of the damage things are swapped. He is untargetable and Un-CC-able and he takes damage from skill shots and EXTRA damage from AOE based abilities. He is able to cast his ulti and his sweep. His E Sweep is all around him in this form instead of just a cone.

His passive is interesting. I really like it, and it would be neat. However, it is massively feast or famine. Either his team is able to stomp and get all the points for the expansion, or they are never even able to see the points in the enemy jg. If he gets ahead to the point where he can have all of the points available, if his team can hold the enemy team from getting the points back, Klein would be unstoppable.

Let's say that the points are about where Skarner's are. If that is the case, then the enemy JG will have a hard time clearing the JG if anyone else other that Klein is able to capture the points. If 3 is the minimum to use your ulti, then that would mean one of those points is in the river. Those are very difficult to keep in the early game and even past the time where he would get his ulti and need to use it. I think that his damage may need to be toned down a bit, but it should only require 2 points to use. For them to be doing consistent damage, I think he needs to have like 5 of them. If he is able to get that many than he has earned that damage. Once he gets 6, I feel like they should increase to double their original size. Taking over the whole map would make him super oppressive and impossible to play against if ahead. It should not impact the lanes at all or the base. That would be insane. They should also never deal damage to JG monsters.

All in all, he brings a unique take on the Skarner point capture mechanic, but his values and and numbers need to be adjusted. I feel like he could do for a new W too, but that is up to you.

I like it.

Derpifier3/18/2017, 12:34:31 PM1 votes

Right now I'm primarily working on another concept that I'll enter for the next CCOS.

Thanks for all of the support and feedback! Don't forget to check out any other concepts by me! Just look up Derpifier, and they all should come up, I think I have about 6 or 7 so far.Rammus "OK."