July MCCC-The Price Of War
(THE IMAGE ABOVE IS NOT MINE AND BELONGS TO NINJATIC ON DEVIANTART! THANKS NINJATIC!)
Hello everyone to the July Monthly Champion Creation Competition for 2015! I am your host, of course, Kamiroo Wolf! As always this will be a four week competition where you create a champion(based off of this specific MCCC) to see who can create the best champion concept within(in this competition's case) very few guidelines. For this MCCC, both Keagn and myself will be hosting and we will be allowing any previously made champion concepts to join in on the fighting. After some debating, we have decided to allow new concepts to be made for this competition(thank Keagn ;3). Stay tuned because this is surely to be the most interesting MCCC of the series yet ^_^
** Schedule)** July 1st-10th=Accepting Entrants! Must have name and basic lore/abilith descriptions to be considered a legitimate entry. July 11th-20th=Time to work on entries July 21st-31st=Judging!
For those of you who are new to the story line here is a little filler in as to what's going on:
Back in 2014, The December MCCC known as The End Of An Age was an MCCC focused around the dismal and empty feeling around Runeterra as another year closes to an end. As it turns out, the forlorn feeling was actually caused by a “disturbance in the force" type of tip in the balance. We each made champions for the MCCC who each had their own experience as to what they witnessed to the end of the age they were in. For me, my champion was Vishas, The Omniscient Shaman. A simple swamp shaman who was confronted by the wisp spirit known as Vaiya, an omniscient goddess who reveals rather frightening images of an impending Armageddon approaching Runeterra. Vishas agrees to aid Vaiya in her quest to save Runeterra from Armageddon itself and plans to do so by utilizing a wide variety of totems and raising an army against the approaching doom, Ahimoth.
Fast forward a couple months later! Not to where Vishas gets into a bar fight with Detective Charlotte La Chéri, but to where Ahimoth DESTROYS THE INSTITUTE OF WAR(So don't use it in your lore regarding this contest), causing Vishas to establish The Order.
The Order is a rag tag group of people who just want to see the world saved wish to defend it with their lives against Ahimoth, the rival god of Vaiya who wishes to enslave the world and bring everyone who dares oppose him to their knees. During the Rise Of An Order(May MCCC) storyline, we follow the tale of Vishas and his recruits as they prepare themselves to stand toe to toe with Ahimoth's army of followers. During this time we are introduced to characters such as Vishas' lieutenants: Eos, Sol, and Kaizer. Eos being a master swordsman with nobody to match his strength in battle other than the Legendary Jax. Sol being a top-notch marksman with aim compared to none other. And finally we have Kaizer, a top of the line medic with decent aim in regards to the side pistol he carries for self defense. The boy's true value lies within the tactical brain he possesses which, as many will confirm, rivals the tactician of Noxus, Swain himself. We also meet a few of Vishas' recruits such as No Name and Leopold, two aspiring defenders of the world with their own purposes for joining The Order. As more and more recruits join, they are tasked with missions to help The Order potentially get over on Ahimoth's forces.
Fast Forward to this last previous month, where the Ahimoth can be seen drawing in the most vile of creatures from all over Runeterra to aid him in his conquest. Dubbed “The Dark Legion", a band of Mercenaries, thugs, and low-lifes. Promising them power and wealth in his new world, they follow Armaggedon and his loyal assistant, The Shade, in a campaign to gain advantages against Vishas' cause. The Shade does pretty much all of the work in gathering Ahimoth's forces and asks that all new recruits potentially show their worth by either assassinating important figures who could prove worrisome for Ahimoth's army in the future, recovering artifacts and in some cases even allies, or seizing points of interest for The Dark Legion's cause. It is during this time that Bandle City, Bilgewater, the Freljord, and even a good portion of Demacia fall.
The following currently existing champions have died in the currently ongoing crossfire between the two sides if the war: Garen, Lux, Sejuani, Olaf, Miss Fortune, Gangplank, Azir, Tristana, Teemo, Azir, Ryze, and Lucian.
Corki, Gnar, and Rumble(residents of Bandle City) escaped Bandle City before it happened to...y'know...go cablooie.
Now both sides prepare themselves for the most influential battle in the history of all Runeterra. Where do your loyalties lie? It's time to pick a side.
Vishas pieces together the remnants of his masterpiece diligently as his lieutenants knock on his door as if the slightest sound would ruin their commander's concentration. Sounds like the shaman is needed on the training grounds for his final speech before the big bonanza. Hard to think it has been a mere eight months since rumor of Ahimoth first surfaced in Runeterra, with Vishas himself being the very tailor of such foreshadowing.
“I do believe it is time we rally our forces, Vaiya. Shall we?" Vishas relaxes his tensed muscles and places a sheet over his creation before stopping to examine the many blueprints for tide turning totem modifications. Various trap, combat stimulation, and medical prototypes rest beneath each blueprint, and Vishas takes his time feeling each of his creations before stepping away and heading for the door of his dimly lit quarters. The lack of light helped him to think.
On the other side of the door he is my by his three lieutenants, Kaizer, Sol, and Eos. Eos pulls the script for a speech out of her gargantuan cleavage, but Vishas turns the document away.
“Everything they hear must come from the heart. It is a NECESSITY before the most influential war in Valoran's history transpires." Vaiya's own voice finds itself mixed into Vishas' words. The mystic auras emanating from the corner of his eye sockets take shelter from the upcoming battle in the air as Vishas and his lieutenants walk down the hall. The few rookies still preparing salute the commander-in-chief as he makes his way to the debriefing, and a few ask him of his confidence.
“I know many things about what will happen during the war...one thing I cannot fathom, however, is the outcome." He calls back to one of the rookies where sits along the marble wall sharpening his runic Dao blade.
“Sir, you still have yet to reveal to us where the majority of the fighting will be taking place. Noxus, Piltover, the remains of Bandle City?" Kaizer walks on the right hand of Vishas, checking a booklet and going over their list of recruits. Always looking for an advantage, that one. The four leaders of The Order finally reach the end of the grand temple's hall and step out into the fair summer morning air. The sky is blue and clear with the mercy of the sun blanketing the warm day. Vishas looks over the massive courtyard and makes his way towards the training grounds not too far away. Once there, he can see most of his allies sparring with one another before the final showdown. Melog faces off against their newest member, Winston Sylace, Korxan Nexol and Freyja are taking a few shots at eachother for the 5th time this week, while Ushio and Jigsaw take turns dropping automatons provided by Kamiroo Wolf, host of the A Fool's Errand competition three months past. Everyone is preparing...Everyone is improving. Vishas looks over his men and is easily aware of who will fall in this fight, and who will survive. He will not allow such a fate to befall those in danger.
“ATTENTION EVERYONE," Vishas roars out into the beautiful morning. His recruits stop what it is they're doing and gather around the shaman for his final words of wisdom before the war. “Let me start by saying that this war WILL BE the most influential in Runeterra's history. Many more will die than will survive. I want to ask anyone who thinks they are not capable to stand up and walk from this place now."
Nobody falters. Everyone around Valoran in support of Vishas' cause gathers around the nearest radio to tune into his speech.
“You have all seen the visions, yes? You all know what is at stake here. We cannot simply stand idle as our world is reduced to cinders. Those of you hear who have been uprooted from your frigid homes in the Freljord due to the Blackfrost?! Those of you who survived the Bandle City Armageddon?! Bildgewater?! This destruction will only continue if we allow it. As much as it pains me, many of you will be going into this fight unprepared, but we shall persevere regardless! The devastation they have wrought can be corrected, but it will only be reinstated if we do not cut off the source of the apocalypse." Vishas calls out into the crowd. As he does, New recruits(even now) emerge on at the top of the steps into the temple. They gather with the crowd and among them, a few iconic faces are visible. The Sinister Blade, Karma, Rumble, Vi, Udyr, and even Bard himself can be seen among the crowd. Vishas meet's eyes with the formerly Mechanized Menace and gives him a nod of sympathy. Rumble's expression is emotionless and void, but the Yordle finds it in himself to seek out and give Winston Sylace the darkest of scowls.
“One thing we cannot afford within our ranks is distrust between allies. You must work as one on the battlefield and run as if a well-oiled machine. We are more than just a mere motley crew of rebels. We are, at the very least, a family. That being said, I am no good with speeches, so the last thing I will say to you all is as follows: You protect your family with your lives! If someone picks a fight with one of us, they pick a fight with all of us! We defend our homes, our ways of life, and we defend who we are! Now go forth and prepare yourselves! This is sure to be a bloody battle. Don't let our blood be what fertilizes the soil at the end of all this." Vishas steps away from the crowd of individuals and a good amount clap for him as walks away. Kaizer and the other lieutenants stay behind to go over a few of tactics and what the army should expect on the battlefield.
“Expect no mercy from these people. We have a multitude of strategic advantages but they have power that, in all honesty, outweighs what we have just a bit. The fighting will be taking place all over Runeterra, in just about every nook and cranny. In the past week, Vishas has taken it upon himself to scatter totems all throughout the land. Hidden under rocks, buried in the dirt, and some even airborne, they will be your greatest allies when it comes to staying alive. Be sure to thank him the next time your wounds are being healed by a magic rock. This is for the good of everyone, y'all. Let's get out there and kick some ass!" Eos, Sol, and Kaizer each give their own section of the speech and are each met with separate cheers. The members of The Order disperse and go back to training while the recruits who have just arrived seek to find a place in the conflict. Sol gives it to them, explaining to each and every recruit just how they can aid the cause. Eos gives last minute aiming tutorials for her marksmen. Kaizer teaches first aid and issues backup weapons to the supports.
Meanwhile, back at the door of his quarters, Vishas speaks to Winston and Katarina. Vishas informs Katarina that her beloved can restored, and The Sinister Blade walks off content with his answer to her problems. The shaman turns to the Arcanium Core Collector and holds out his hand.
“The seal provided to you by Shade, if you will? I understand it serves as a transportation device of sorts. Should prove invaluable to some of our troops." Winston hands over the medallion and Vishas looks it over carefully before placing it back in Winston's hands.
“I am entrusting it to you. You'll be playing a rather important role in all of this, after all." Vishas waves away a rather confused Slyace but the Arcanium Collector just shrugs off the shaman's words. Vishas turns and heads back into his quarters whilst Winston retires to his own for a good nap...or at least, an attempt at one.
Within his dimly lit territory, Vishas unveils his latest masterpiece and looks over it. The compact and concentrated Arcanium should possess enough artificial lifeforce for the totem to serve it's purpose, but Vishas can not help but feel something is missing. The Omniscient Shaman paces back and forth within his limited space, calculating, thinking, and analyzing everything presented to him thus far. The names of Ahimoth's forces, their abilities, their personalities, the capabilities of his newest creation, the odds of success...everything. After about an hour passes, the shaman finds himself seated on his bed running his fingers through the dreadlocks on his head. He is just about ready to go and search for The Remains himself when a rather irritated knock stirs him from his train of thought. The shaman rises to his feet and veils his creation before opening up the door to a rather exasperated young woman. Pé, they call her. She takes it upon herself to push her way into the shaman's room before promptly taking a seat on his bed and letting out an exaggerated sigh. Vishas offers her some of the water he had been drinking but she simply looks at him once before turning it down.
“I ask you how I can help the cause and you send me running all around the damn world looking for dead bodies!? Please tell me how that's fair when everyone else gets to fight and practice and spar?" The 15 year old breathes as if she is on her lungs' last reserves and the shaman just rolls his eyes before unveiling his creation once more.
“I trust your presence means that you have collected all of the bodies?" He asks as he delicately removes the totem from the table. Pé rises to her feet and gives the shaman a thumbs up before heading towards his doorway. She ruffles her own frizzy black hair and wipes the dirt off her cheeks before asking officially completing her task.
“I got your dead bodies, now where's the warm bath and food you promised me for when I finished the mission? I swear to the gods if it was a lie-" Vishas silences the young, light dark-skinned girl by placing the totem over her mouth.
“Watch your tongue when addressing gods, firstly," Vaiya's own tone of annoyance finds itself mixed in with Vishas'.“And second, the bath is being run as you speak. As for your food, how does smoked salmon and plant bulbs sound?" Vishas removes the totem from her lips and places it gently in the basket bound to his back.
“Sheesh, it's like you think I'm a real bear or something. Do I really HAVE to eat all of the plant bulbs?" She whines and gives the shaman puppy eyes as the two exit his room. Vishas shuts and locks his door before turning to the young prodigy.
“You do. You came to me demanding I give you information on how to improve your connection to the Ursine within, this is how I do it. If you REALLY want to improve your connection to your Ursine half then you could go bathe in the Placidium's rivers and receive fish from there?" The shaman jokes and ruffles the hair of Pé, who backs up from the shaman with a smile.
“As much as I would love to get naked and splash around in a public river, I'm going to have to pass. The bodies are just outside the cellar behind the temple! You can't miss em!" Pé calls back to Vishas as she takes off on four legs down the hallway towards her bath. The shaman cracks a smile before turning and heading down the opposite end of the hall.
No Name and Leopold stand by the bodies with fingers pinched tightly on their noses, and are trying their hardest to keep themselves from gagging when Vishas arrives. He orders the two to line up the bodies in a line and the shaman proceeds the help them. The smell of death has no effect on Vishas...perhaps because the shaman knows all too well how it works. Once lined up, the shaman goes over each body to make sure all of the deceased are accounted for. Garen, Lux, Sejuani, Olaf, Miss Fortune, Gangplank, Azir, Tristana, Teemo, Azir, Ryze, and Lucian. All champions who must be preserved if things are to ever return to normal at the end of all this. Vishas removes his latest creation, the Retribution Totem, from the basket behind him and places it firmly into the ground surrounding the bodies. In just mere hours they will be returned to life via artificial lifeforce, and Vishas will be one step closer to assured victory.
_“Almost there, Vaiya...might I ask you what is to become of us after this all ends?" _
The people of Valoran take shelter wherever they can as the stage is set for war. Many sympathize with Vishas in the hopes that the shaman can salvage what is left of their world, while the rest see Lord Ahimoth as the next step necessary for Runeterra's history. Either that or they have been promised power beyond imagination. The Order did not aid Demacia in the siege against it, instead they sat back and stayed up to date on the events. This has turned quite a few against The Order, but even more oppose Ahimoth's legion. Each side gathers its forces before the bloody battle takes place all across the soil of Valoran.
Ahimoth scoffs and spits on the disemboweled body of his once loyal ally as he wipes their blood from the monstrosity that is his right arm. He swings away the remainder of the crimson substance threatening to stain the spines of his sword-arm before ordering back to work those who witnessed him dispatch their comrade.
“There will be no mutiny. No insurrection. No rebellion. All who boast defiance shall suffer the same fate as our dear friend, Terris." The Omnipotent Leader barks to his troops as they prepare themselves for war. All who pass by him refuse to meet his gaze and are wise for it. At a time such as this, it would be best not to anger the man who can expel your life force with so much as a tap to your heart.
In light of the Shade's absence, Ahimoth is forced to take it upon himself to get the maggots under his leadership prepared for the final battle. The Omnipotent makes a mental note to punish the Shade whenever he returns. Each and every sack of blood Ahimoth pushes his way through, highly expendable. No better than mercenaries or thugs for hire. Ahimoth scribes another mental note reminding himself to cut down each and every one of the peasants surrounding him after he wins the war.
“Of course these people DO possess physical value for labour and such...perhaps I will only expunge the weak."
An hour passes and the leader of The Dark Legion is standing at the edge of the Bandle City- or, at least, what remains of the devastated city state. One of Ahimoth's more valuable soldiers, Winston Sylace, receives the credit for bringing Armageddon upon the city from within. According to the Shade, much to Ahimoth's chagrin, Winston has defected to the side of Vaiya, and the order. The Legion now utilizes the ruins as a recently fortified base of operations for the first phase of their attack on The Order.
“We stand on the very cusp of dominion, my lord. Is it true all of this world will be ours to claim once Vaiya is removed from the picture?" The man behind the monstrosity known as Ahimoth questions. The spirit within him speaks in tone to the rhythm of his heart with a wistful and yet nostalgic tone.
“The people of this world will yield to no other force than power...All of this world will be mine once Vaiya has been stripped of the husk she controls." The wisp within Ahimoth doesn't answer the man directly, shying away from the desired answer. The spirit has been mumbling all day, perhaps lost in the trance of the upcoming climax to the story they had all been so eagerly awaiting.
The Omnipotent Armageddon looks just below the fortified wall he stands on and observes his most valuable force preparing themselves at the base of the headquarter's most reliable defense. The only ones that are not yet present among them are “Envoy" and Marilda, who has other business to attend to in Bilgewater regarding the Greenskin Occupation. Ahimoth takes a moment to go over a calculation or two in his head regarding the strength of his champions, and how they match up to what he assumes Vaiya may be packing.
(Story below by: Keagn)
"I'm afraid you waste your time, my Lord."
Ahimoth recognized the Shade's voice, and turned prepared to punish the Lieutenant for his absence, but was surprised at what he saw. The Shade looked ragged, his faded red cloak had been weathered and torn, and his body was bandaged almost entirely in runic scrolls. What skin did show was a sickly grey-white that had a faint glow to it. The Shade supported himself upon his ancient blade, his true name engraved upon it in the language of the Old Kingdom. This caused the Lord to hesitate, for although the Shade appeared as if he would succumb to death at any moment, the power he radiated was far stronger than who Ahimoth recalled.
"What has delayed you, Shade?" Ahimoth questioned. The Shade limped over to his Lord's side, waiting a moment before revealing a grim black spear that was cold to the touch. There was no doubt in Ahimoth's mind that this blade belonged to the Spirit of Vengeance, but how the Shade acquired it (and why for that matter) escaped his perception. After a moment's delay, the Shade replied with, "Tying loose ends."
Before the Shade stood what remained of the Dark Legion, with only the forces occupying Bilgewater being an exception. He may have been able to hold them here, but he was not so fortunate at keeping on the battlefield. If the so called legion could not handle the taste of battle in the siege of Demacia, they surely would not be able to handle the battles to come, and this was something the Shade had to...correct. With Ryze's scroll, Ezreal's amulet, and Kalista's black spear, the Shade would have access to a force far stronger than any that has walked across Runeterra in quite some time...
"Legionnaires, it has been some time since you last stood before me," the Shade began to say, his words seemingly echoing throughout the surrounding area, originating from everywhere and no where at the same time, "I confess myself...disappointed."
Ethereal chains entangled each legionnaire, causing panic to arise within their ranks. Once restrained, the Shade could enact his plan. Uncoiling the scroll, he began to recite the incantation while holding the black spear over the runic glyphs, and drawing power from the amulet in his other hand. The magical bonds which held the mass began to burn into their flesh, soon causing each being to burst into black flames. They would experience a great deal of pain before the ritual was complete, but when it was, the Dark Legion would be born anew, without weakness, and without fear.
This display was more of a test than anything. The Shade had to know that the ritual would work before he tried it on targets of importance. Death would be cheated in this act, but if Lord Ahimoth should claim dominion of Runeterra, it will be of no consequence. But if any chance of victory was to be crafted, there would be a great deal of trials to come....
Both sides buckle down and prepare themselves for the most influential war in Runeterra's history. Bildgewater has fallen to goblins, Bandle City has been blown to bits by none other than Winston Sylace, The Arcanium Core Collector, The Freljord has been overtaken by a corrupting Blackfrost which threatens the natural lives of all its inhabitants, and finally Demacia's walls have been decimated rendering the city vulnerable to attack at any given moment!
Lore Challenges:
This is it. The final battle. Both sides prepare themselves before the continental war takes place. There is sure to be blood. For now, there is to be no activity but waiting for the fighting to begin. Sure to be one of the most riveting competitions yet, please stay tuned and stay updated! Create a story that reflects your champion's thoughts and how they feel about the impending conflict. Be sure to include what they are fighting for as well as which side they are going to be fighting against.
FOR THIS MCCC, WE ARE ALLOWING ANY CHAMPIONS THAT BELONG TO YOU TO JOIN IN ON THE FIGHT.
Lore and Kit Challenges:
As mentioned time and time again, we are allowing any previously made champion concepts to participate in the competition and excluding any new ones. It is a bit too late for new recruits, but you may still enter with one, regardless of your champion's origin, you must choose one of the following based on your entry:
If your champion is on Ahimoth's Side:
Explain somewhere in your lore why it is they are joining Ahimoth and The Legion as well as what they hope to bring to the army. Be sure to include how THEY are preparing for war.
If your champion is on Vishas' Side:
Explain somewhere in your lore why it is they are Joining Vishas and The Order as well as what the vision was that inspired them to do so. Be sure to include how THEY are preparing for war.
If your champion was originally on one side in previous competitions, but has switched over to the other:
Be sure to include somewhere in your lore why it is that they have defected over the the opposite side, how they are doing amongst their new comrades, and how THEY are preparing for war.
If your champion is new to either side: Have them prove their worth by creating a section in your lore that has them demonstrating all of their abilities while fighting against 5 powerful automatons. The automatons they will be fighting against posses shadow abilities that allow them to strike from all corners of the darkness. The catch is that your champion cannot be hit once. Good luck!
Rubric
Lore Rubric: Does your lore accurately display the functions of your champion, does it hit home and stir emotion, and how well is it written(or typed, I guess)? Since this is my only third MCCC, The rubric may be similar to my last. However, with this MCCC, The kit, ability synergy, and lore will critically affect your score just as much as balance/stats. Anyway, back on topic, here's some of the criteria regarding your entrant's lore:
Clarity-syntax does your lore have proper spelling and grammar?
Fluidity-does your lore flow well in story going from point to point and makes sense? Does your lore follow the current story line we have weaved throughout the past few months? If you have questions regarding the dos and donts of the Vishas Vs. Ahimoth story then please don't hesitate to ask.
Theme- does your lore have a strong thematic approach?
Motivation- does your lore explain how they got their powers and why they joined this particular competition? Why does your champion exist?
Tone and mood- how does it read and does it inspire emotional or positive response? Does the reader like reading it?
Originality- is your lore original or unique? Does it keep the reader interested?
Lore is scored x/20 points.
Theme) Do the abilities and lore fit the overall theme?
Theme is scored x/15.
Lore Ability Synergy) Do your abilities reflect your character?
LAS is scored x/15.
Abilities/kit(and balance...don't forget balance)
Is your champion balanced? Are they fun to play with, against, or as? Is your champion's kit unique, or different from existing champions'? How are the character's mechanics? Are they clunky or confusing? Does the enemy have a way to fight back against your character? If not, then your entrant may need a mass rework.
Abilities/Kit are scored x/20.
Creativity) Is the champion creative and original, or is it at least an interesting take on something that has already been done/existed?
Creativity is scored x/15.
Kit Cohesion Synergy) Does everything in your abilities section work well together?
Cohesion Synergy is scored x/10.
[Note: The secret lore challenge will be worth x/5 points]
((Rubric look familiar? I sure hope it does!))
Entrants(Vishas' The Order):
Vex, The Vanarus' Fury by Tamur
Pico, The Gemini Blade by The Red Goat
Goram, Wrath Of Nature by Blackbird123
Entrants(Ahimoth's The Dark Legion):
Corrin, The Corporate Swordman by TerkMC
Pereku, Predator of the Frail by Showcase 25
Messala, Shadow Of The Emperor by utDOOM
Lance, Research and Development by The Core Augur
Be sure to pick a side(post who you support here!) and stick around! As always ask any questions you have regarding the story line or the competition below and I will try my hardest to answer as many as I can ;3
May the odds be ever in your favor during these times of strife.